Arthur Vaso Poet Free verse

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Turned On

In the deepest of emotions
A desire to please
Be loved
Caressing tears like the wind
Kissing dreams in creamy lace
Carnal is the heart of seduction
Insane and sublime
Holding both body and soul
To my beating heart
No one shall see my weeping face
Our love was eternal
As you died in my arms

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James Swartz March 18, 2018 at 11:34 AM Love and loss need a balance. You wrote wonderful words to express this.

Viv Wigley March 14, 2018 at 3:24 AM Lovely, sad, moving, Arthur. Regards, Viv

Tim Smith March 13, 2018 at 2:20 PM The love breathes into the here after

Andrea Dietrich March 12, 2018 at 6:10 PM That is beautifully sad, Arthur. Thanks for visiting my poem today! (Oh I looked down and saw Shadow of the past used my same phrase to describe your poem!!)

Freddie Robinson Jr. March 12, 2018 at 2:27 PM Pow! This poem defibs the heart, Arthur. Would one kiss bring a love demise back to life? Keep the current turned on and keep it flowing right. This poem certainly does both. Your emotional shades has 360 degrees of depth. Circular logic that always end where it starts. Beautiful prose. Love and smiles always.

FJ Thomas March 12, 2018 at 1:56 PM Art how beautifully sad. Your words melt the heart.

Jan Allison March 12, 2018 at 5:16 AM wow Arthur so so different from your deep sad turned off poem - very beautiful but such an emotional ending:-) hugs jan xx

Darren White March 12, 2018 at 12:38 AM Dreamy and beautiful my friend :)

Robertina B. March 11, 2018 at 11:03 PM Beautiful Arthur!!