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In the deepest of emotions A desire to please Be loved Caressing tears like the wind Kissing dreams in creamy lace Carnal is the heart of seduction Insane and sublime Holding both body and soul To my beating heart No one shall see my weeping face Our love was eternal As you died in my arms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 3/18/2018 11:34:00 AM
Love and loss need a balance. You wrote wonderful words to express this.
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Date: 3/14/2018 3:24:00 AM
Lovely, sad, moving, Arthur. Regards, Viv
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Date: 3/13/2018 2:20:00 PM
The love breathes into the here after
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Date: 3/12/2018 6:10:00 PM
That is beautifully sad, Arthur. Thanks for visiting my poem today! (Oh I looked down and saw Shadow of the past used my same phrase to describe your poem!!)
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Date: 3/12/2018 2:27:00 PM
Pow! This poem defibs the heart, Arthur. Would one kiss bring a love demise back to life? Keep the current turned on and keep it flowing right. This poem certainly does both. Your emotional shades has 360 degrees of depth. Circular logic that always end where it starts. Beautiful prose. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 3/12/2018 1:56:00 PM
Art how beautifully sad. Your words melt the heart.
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Date: 3/12/2018 5:16:00 AM
wow Arthur so so different from your deep sad turned off poem - very beautiful but such an emotional ending:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/12/2018 12:38:00 AM
Dreamy and beautiful my friend :)
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Date: 3/11/2018 11:03:00 PM
Beautiful Arthur!!
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