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In the deepest of emotions A desire to please Be loved Caressing tears like the wind Kissing dreams in creamy lace Carnal is the heart of seduction Insane and sublime Holding both body and soul To my beating heart No one shall see my weeping face Our love was eternal As you died in my arms

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James Swartz

Date: 3/18/2018 11:34:00 AM

Love and loss need a balance. You wrote wonderful words to express this.

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/14/2018 3:24:00 AM

Lovely, sad, moving, Arthur. Regards, Viv

Tim Smith

Date: 3/13/2018 2:20:00 PM

The love breathes into the here after

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2018 6:10:00 PM

That is beautifully sad, Arthur. Thanks for visiting my poem today! (Oh I looked down and saw Shadow of the past used my same phrase to describe your poem!!)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/12/2018 2:27:00 PM

Pow! This poem defibs the heart, Arthur. Would one kiss bring a love demise back to life? Keep the current turned on and keep it flowing right. This poem certainly does both. Your emotional shades has 360 degrees of depth. Circular logic that always end where it starts. Beautiful prose. Love and smiles always.