Turned Around

Hateful as they may be, to the eye
and ear, the elimination of words,
statues, ideas, etc., will do nothing
toward making a venom free society – 

to flood with light, explaining,

though far more difficult,
more laborious (seemingly impossible
at times) is the only palatable good. 

A great, natural builder, artist, 
builds his (his/hers – God I hate this,
Politically Correct) foundation using 
those odd, irregular stones as well as the 
seeming, symmetrically perfect – 

variations, outliers are a blessing,
and not a Cosmic Blemish – 

the fault, if any to be laid, is when using 
ourselves, needlessly, hurtfully -- making
arrow-heads of the pen's of Valentines...

Taking free-thought away from children
will only do away with individuality,

leaving soulless shells instead -- 

not cleansed human beings, ready for
fresh priming; but globs of rancid, detergent 
filled sponges -- the soppy, dead remains, 
of what were once, thriving, healthy, alive 
brains... 

gone any true worthfulness, and sense
of sacred being....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 10/15/2021 5:16:00 AM
Joe, we destroy our history and tragically it will be repeated because our children will not be informed......and so the vicious cycle of a world at odds continues. Take Care, Paulette
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/15/2021 9:30:00 AM
Very wise and thoughtful comment. I fear, too often we are just speaking to the choir. I am afraid that, so long as people focus more on changing the outward -- and less the inward -- nothing will change for the truly better. The outward always a refection of what is inside. Blessings! Your analysis and input really made my day.
Date: 10/8/2021 7:25:00 AM
Sad but true, when I saw statues of the past, I thought, - how beautiful, how tragic, may we learn for our children's sakes but alas, we hide it, tear it down, easily overlook in hopes to forget rather than learn.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/8/2021 12:28:00 PM
One cannot forget what is manufactured within...these things are only reflections of ourselves -- until selves are changed, sights and sounds will always be reproduced a-new, in one alternate form or another. In essence, that same old. Thank you, DM., your comments have made my day. Blessings!
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