Turn Your Head and Kafka

my days as a
larvae are
largely a
worth
while
living

eating leaves
apart from bark
of fallen trees
life's a lark
except to
mind the

aardvarks and
andvanced
chimps that
surmise this
stick looks
like a tool

but that's old
school for a
feeling foretold
someday my wings
would unfold and
what after all are

wings 
but who am i
to think these
things untrue
so a day comes
and i find i'm one

a hard shelled
beetle but in bed
on my back and
can't get up to
use those oh so
useful wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 3/9/2020 9:12:00 AM
I wonder how many potential flyers remain grounded.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/9/2020 4:43:00 PM
Lol Richard. I was hoping for the idea of "the Metamorphosis" would shine through, but I guess it didn't work... oh well
Date: 3/7/2020 1:17:00 PM
Better late than never, If I could only get up...I'd fly...a hard shelled beetle on it's back must spread wings or die...I like the creativity here...
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 3/8/2020 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Arturo. Thanks very much.
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