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Turn of Fall

Cooling morning air
Aspen leaves are golden disks
    spark’ling in the sun



for Brian Strand's Images of Fall contest

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Elaine George

October 20, 2009 at 2:00 AM

AWESOME HAIKU, TRUDY. LOVE, LAINIE

Abe Lopez

September 11, 2009 at 6:49 PM

the leaves here will soon be transforming as well..... nice write!

September 1, 2009 at 1:58 PM

Nice use of imagery. I like the thought of "golden disks/spark'ing in the sun." Uplifting view. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for taking time to comment on mine. Keep on writing!! Karen

C. E. Mcmullin

August 25, 2009 at 5:04 PM

How true, O haiku writer, you! One for the favorites file. Thank-you for your welcome comments, much appreciated! poet butterfly

Matthew Anish

August 23, 2009 at 7:06 PM

Well - the autumn poems are now beginning to appear on the "Soup" I especially like the line "Aspen leaves are golden disks". Very pretty and unique! Yours Matthew Anish