Turmoil

I wake up each day as this person or that person but never as the same person. A personality bereft of individuality or the luxury of tranquillity, ignited by a past which always denies me sustenance or grace or love that my soul so inconsistently desires. Please accept the irony... if not then pass by

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Judy Konos

Date: 4/11/2011 6:38:00 AM

I accept only the talent. You are one helluva writer...Keep it up....and thanks

Dana Smith

Date: 12/20/2010 10:29:00 AM

I can relate.. Well written.. Enjoyed... Dana'lynn

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 11/17/2010 6:30:00 PM

Hi Peter.I liked this although I sensed a certain sadness reading it.I'm not sure what the loss of identity implies.Whether it refers to a multiple personality.or,as with us all,the different moods and a turmoil of emotions we all have, not knowing where we're going in life.or what we want out of it.Yet deep down we all seek piece of mind and of course all want to be loved.If what I have said is right off the wall. I'm sorry.But it doesn't alter the fact I enjoyed this.Love June(S)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/17/2010 6:20:00 PM

irony eccepted lol, i really like this one,, i think I somehow have different personalities depending on my mood he he,, enjoyed,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/17/2010 5:37:00 PM

I hope just a write on a topic and not your life..I would hate for your soul to be denied sustenance or grace or love..I was delight that you enjoyed my work about the Tan Sparrow..That was a rare moment in time..I was glad that it happpened so that I could put it on paper..Sara

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/17/2010 4:57:00 PM

Intriguing and interesting write, reminds me of a split personality personified. Excellent piece.