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Tunnels of Ambiguity

On trains that travel through tunnels of ambiguity. The motion of the wheels meld into the subconscious. A commuter routine of blood sweat and ignorance. Outside fragmented windows stand the borders of disease. A chaotic jumble of envy and spiritless ineptitude. Roll into the station whilst time grinds still. Tickets to oblivion checked by the conductor of greed. End of the line stretches into infinite divergences.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/8/2010 3:41:00 PM
enjoyed--I feel like the queen of ambiguity at times.
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Date: 4/3/2010 11:11:00 AM
Excellent title!
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Date: 4/3/2010 9:31:00 AM
That is why one should never get on "that old black train" as the song says. Great poem, welll written. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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