Andrea Dietrich Poet Free verse

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Tunnel Vision Wayra

my tunnel vision

allows me to see only

the river of steel leading

to where - I do not know.

imagination has fled me


Aug. 16, 2019
for the 'SECOND EDITION OF WAYRA' Poetry Contest
Sponsor: nette onclaud

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Subimal Sinha-Roy August 23, 2019 at 7:24 AM Congratulations, Andrea on your win. The title is so meaningful.

Eve Roper August 22, 2019 at 11:55 PM Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve

Kurt Ravidas August 22, 2019 at 6:37 PM Heh, c'est super! This is not imagination flee, this is zen) Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2019 at 6:50 PM THANK you!

Line Gauthier August 22, 2019 at 4:56 AM Well done, Andrea. Congrats on your win.

Tom Cunningham August 21, 2019 at 3:49 PM Back with congrats on your win Andrea. Tom

Nette Onclaud August 21, 2019 at 3:15 PM you seized the moment of uncertainty, andie with this fine poem... huge congrats on your winning spot in my challenge!

John Gondolf August 21, 2019 at 2:49 PM Congrats, Andrea, I enjoyed your tunnel vision of indecision. All the best. Hugs, John Andrea Dietrich August 21, 2019 at 2:55 PM Indecision (or lack of imagination) is for sure! I think I liked my last line the best.

Paul Callus August 21, 2019 at 2:46 PM Imagination runs faster than a train, Andrea. It must be endlessly roaming those underground tunnels! ~ Congratulations on your fine win. ~ Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen August 21, 2019 at 1:48 PM - Great written, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos August 20, 2019 at 11:15 AM An endless tunnel - uncertainty, darkness, where are we going? Very difficult contest but some great entries, yours included. Hugs, Jennifer.

CayCay Godwin August 19, 2019 at 2:00 PM Love the wording that builds to a tease where one is left with so much to ponder. Great job. Love ... CayCay

Robert Johnson August 19, 2019 at 9:53 AM Well let's hope it's a short tunnel Andrea. We can't have our girl's imagination fleeing for long. <3 Oh, I think I see a light. I'm going to go read the next one now. :) <3

Ann Foster August 18, 2019 at 7:40 PM River of steel... i love that...Ann

Sandra Adams August 18, 2019 at 1:12 PM nice way to keep the mysterious feel to this one...good one! :) hugs

Silent One August 18, 2019 at 5:23 AM i like what you did with the image Andrea, nice new profile photo also...

Panagiota Romios August 17, 2019 at 12:30 PM Good luck Andrea. Panagiota

Vijay Pandit August 17, 2019 at 7:04 AM Surely tunnel vision..who knows where to!

Tom Cunningham August 17, 2019 at 5:27 AM Some gems for this contest yours included. Tom

Kim Merryman August 16, 2019 at 9:22 PM This is good, Andrea! Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim