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my tunnel vision allows me to see only the river of steel leading to where - I do not know. imagination has fled me Aug. 16, 2019 for the 'SECOND EDITION OF WAYRA' Poetry Contest Sponsor: nette onclaud

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Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 8/23/2019 7:24:00 AM

Congratulations, Andrea on your win. The title is so meaningful.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2019 11:55:00 PM

Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 8/22/2019 6:37:00 PM

Heh, c'est super! This is not imagination flee, this is zen)

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/22/2019 6:50:00 PM

THANK you!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/22/2019 4:56:00 AM

Well done, Andrea. Congrats on your win.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/21/2019 3:49:00 PM

Back with congrats on your win Andrea. Tom

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/21/2019 3:15:00 PM

you seized the moment of uncertainty, andie with this fine poem... huge congrats on your winning spot in my challenge!

John Gondolf

Date: 8/21/2019 2:49:00 PM

Congrats, Andrea, I enjoyed your tunnel vision of indecision. All the best. Hugs, John

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/21/2019 2:55:00 PM

Indecision (or lack of imagination) is for sure! I think I liked my last line the best.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/21/2019 2:46:00 PM

Imagination runs faster than a train, Andrea. It must be endlessly roaming those underground tunnels! ~ Congratulations on your fine win. ~ Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2019 1:48:00 PM

- Great written, Andrea :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/20/2019 11:15:00 AM

An endless tunnel - uncertainty, darkness, where are we going? Very difficult contest but some great entries, yours included. Hugs, Jennifer.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/19/2019 2:00:00 PM

Love the wording that builds to a tease where one is left with so much to ponder. Great job. Love ... CayCay

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/19/2019 9:53:00 AM

Well let's hope it's a short tunnel Andrea. We can't have our girl's imagination fleeing for long. <3 Oh, I think I see a light. I'm going to go read the next one now. :) <3