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It’s not just a metaphor These times, this life We’ve got to make **** momentarily suffice And when you try to fight it And when you try to lose it Sometimes you find you just, Got to roll in it Sometimes you find you’ve just Won back the **** There’s a taste that you don’t wanna swallow Yeah try for meaning but you feel so hollow Memories linger sweet and still its Hard oh You can’t find what, what you’re lookin for Can’t find what, what you’re lookin for No… yeah, no ---Another verse inspired by Mother Mother and Ryan Guldemond's chords! Love this group!!! The "yeah, no" is very much inspired by their song "Letter"...one of my favorite songs of all time :) My favorite lyrics from that song: "Love is just a syllable, and pain's the same So is it just a little overkill writing the days away?" Brilliance, no? --sorry, badly fangirling. XD ------

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Date: 4/21/2018 8:52:00 AM
Sounds like a well expressed bad day Laura.
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Date: 4/1/2018 11:27:00 PM
Interesting write this Laura, yeah Life sometimes sucks, sometimes shit happens, but still goes on. What can one do but laugh or cry?? ....Maria xx
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/2/2018 6:53:00 PM
Agreed! Thanks for taking the time here, for the cheery words. Always appreciated! <3~Laura
Date: 3/31/2018 6:20:00 PM
What a coaster ride. This is, essentially, how my Mondays go. :) Fighting that hollow feeling...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/2/2018 6:52:00 PM
Monday, Monday! Gottah love those Mondays! KNow the feeling too well! <3~Laura
Date: 3/24/2018 6:59:00 AM
Fangirl to your heart's content, dear. Words move us differently and something can help us "keep our S$IT together" why not? Interesting piece, here. Hugs
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/2/2018 6:52:00 PM
Yes, exactly! Thank you for your kind words. I always appreciate your insight. <3 ~Laura

Book: Shattered Sighs