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Tumble Down Santa

In the blizzard, Rudolph tumbled and swayed, Santa lost his balance, fell down dismayed, What surprise was in store! When I opened the door, And saw gifts scattered with Santa out, splayed!
2nd December 2022 For Tania Kitchin's "A Funny Christmas or December Holiday Limerick" contest

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Date: 12/8/2022 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations, Jo! Enjoyed the di-splay ;)
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Date: 12/4/2022 2:35:00 PM
Congrats for your win, Jo. I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 12/4/2022 10:01:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me chuckle. God bless you.
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Date: 12/4/2022 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jo! :)
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Date: 12/4/2022 6:34:00 AM
Good one. I enjoyed the chuckle this morn. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 12/3/2022 6:29:00 PM
Lol! Congratulations, Jo, for your wonderful win in Tania’s contest with your sweet and funny limerick. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/3/2022 3:33:00 PM
Jo, congratulations on your winning placement, a sweet limerick!
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Date: 12/2/2022 7:25:00 PM
Such a silly sight to see, on Christmas Eve. Santa and Rudolph stumbling and tumbling about. Your thoughts bring a smile, Jo. I'm sure you'll do well in the contest. Good luck. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/2/2022 4:06:00 AM
Great one ! I can picture this vividly :)
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Date: 12/1/2022 11:11:00 PM
Oh no, someone isn't going to get their presents this year lol. Good luck Jo. Tom
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Date: 12/1/2022 11:03:00 PM
So sweet Jo! Debx
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Date: 12/1/2022 10:48:00 PM
Quite a funny limerick. Well done.
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