Joanna Daniel Poet Limerick

Tumble Down Santa

In the blizzard, Rudolph tumbled and swayed, 
Santa lost his balance, fell down dismayed, 
What surprise was in store! 
When I opened the door, 
And saw gifts scattered with Santa out, splayed! 



2nd December 2022

For Tania Kitchin's "A Funny Christmas or December Holiday Limerick" contest

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Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2022 at 4:35 AM Congratulations, Jo! Enjoyed the di-splay ;)

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2022 at 2:35 PM Congrats for your win, Jo. I enjoyed the read.

Beata Agustin December 4, 2022 at 10:01 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me chuckle. God bless you.

Linda Alice Fowler December 4, 2022 at 7:12 AM Congratulations on your win Jo! :)

Sara Kendrick December 4, 2022 at 6:34 AM Good one. I enjoyed the chuckle this morn. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Susan Ashley December 3, 2022 at 6:29 PM Lol! Congratulations, Jo, for your wonderful win in Tania’s contest with your sweet and funny limerick. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Tania Kitchin December 3, 2022 at 3:33 PM Jo, congratulations on your winning placement, a sweet limerick!

Brandy Nicole December 2, 2022 at 7:25 PM Such a silly sight to see, on Christmas Eve. Santa and Rudolph stumbling and tumbling about. Your thoughts bring a smile, Jo. I'm sure you'll do well in the contest. Good luck. :) Hugs, Brandy

Heidi Sands December 2, 2022 at 4:06 AM Great one ! I can picture this vividly :)

Tom Cunningham December 1, 2022 at 11:11 PM Oh no, someone isn't going to get their presents this year lol. Good luck Jo. Tom

Deb M December 1, 2022 at 11:03 PM So sweet Jo! Debx

Victor Buhagiar December 1, 2022 at 10:48 PM Quite a funny limerick. Well done.