Tulips

Tulips crimson lips
Tulips straight erect flying
Share the same war zone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 3:03 AM
Sara, reading your poetry today has been a pleasure. Thank you for sharing your words. Keep writing. And thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann PS I've read this several time. I'm going to favorite it.
Freeman Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 7:11 PM
Awesome Haiku,Sara. thanks for sharing. Thanks also for your support of my work. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Gumbo Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 2:16 PM
Tulips, so beautiful and such a powerful Haiku. Tulips, created in our image... Wonderful writing.
Fraser Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Beautiful flowers Sara, nice Haiku >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Interesting words in your Haiku Sara.. wish I could see some tulips right about now.. talking snow Friday for sure... off to trial I go now.. be back next week... enjoyed.. thankxxx for your loving comments too.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Culverhouse Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 4:15 AM
good one mom, many meanings in there, hope you have a good day. Oh the CRV still won't run. I am using the van to take Caleb to school.
Haick Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 2:31 PM
Insightful write, Sara! Great Haiku. Thank you for reading and leaving kind comments on my poems! Peace, Audrey
Sheart Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 1:15 PM
Now this is what I call brilliant!! Powerful visual indeed. My heart mind and spirit absorbs the paradox of insight here! .....Love Light Patty
Devonshire Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 10:49 AM
Wow, tulips sharing the war zone is a portrait of irony. Powerful haiku, Sara! Love, Carolyn
Pickett Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 7:34 AM
I am a fan of the Magnolia flower myself... Tulips are nice too..... Nice write Sara.....:JP]
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