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Tulip Tour Time a Pantoum

The tulip crop is in full bloom. The cars have stopped for miles. I watch in safety from my room. Warm weather brings out smiles. The cars have stopped for miles. Passengers unload to see the flowers. Warm weather brings out smiles. Raptly they gaze for hours. Passengers unload to see the flowers. The colors are so entrancing, Raptly they gaze for hours, Until they know the time's advancing. 3/30/16

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/7/2016 4:21:00 PM

Hi Joyce, Congratulations on your win in the contest. A beautiful write....Mike.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 10:01:00 PM

Joyce, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/6/2016 2:17:00 AM

Congrats on ur HM with this lovely poem Joyce..

Jan Allison

Date: 4/4/2016 5:18:00 PM

Reminds me of when we visited the bulb fields in Holland:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 4/4/2016 12:14:00 PM

love this one, dear Joyce - just had to read this one as you'd mentioned your tulips at Easter! I loved the tulips in Amsterdam & we have a few here in the garden. Beautiful flowers. Have a lovely week xx

Andrea Edwards

Date: 3/31/2016 10:25:00 PM

This is a really fun little poem! I find that writing Pantoums is even better when they're longer. It's like the farther away you get from those first two lines, the more interesting the ending gets. Do you agree? Anyway, lovely job. I really like how focused you are on the subject and gentle the rhymes are.