Tugging the Strands

The master forces his clowns to laugh when polka dots become the wearers. An audience roars…a pained choreograph; behind the scene, the wounded howl tears. What man is he who tugs the moppet strands? Twisting acts at whim for raunchy tricks and controlling moves through strict demands, only to bruise the shame he inflicts. The crowd hollers as he waves the rope Oh master gloats; new slapstick begins. Hushed are the young mimics just to cope, till one bawls ,” please Dad, we are your kin.” John Lawless' Puppets Contest by nette onclaud 12/25/2014
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Roper Avatar
December 30, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Brenda is right; too many parents do mistreat their children like puppets. Congratulations on your win Blessing and a Happy New Year Nette 7
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December 30, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Brenda is right; too many parents do mistreat their children like puppets. Congratulations on your win Blessing and a Happy New Year Nette 7
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December 30, 2014 at 7:53 AM
Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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December 29, 2014 at 3:44 PM
Shocking reality. Very sad reminder of to many households. Congratulations on your win Nette
Lamoureux Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 2:14 PM
Congratulations Nette!
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 9:26 AM
Congrats nette.Love-rajat
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December 28, 2014 at 9:21 AM
Nette, this is an awesome win. Congrats. Linda
Mcdaid Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 3:50 PM
love how you drew this nette deep excellent pen dear pal
Kiser Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 2:00 PM
A rather strong master pulls those strings, indeed. Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 1:22 PM
I found this quite chilling nette - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 12:47 PM
Hi Nette, congratulations on your win! Very deep and so sad how this can happen in families...gave me goosebumps. Hugs, Sandra
Lawless Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 12:00 PM
Nette, thanks so much for participating in my first attempt at a contest. This is a chilling write and sadly all to frequently real to too many.
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 11:51 AM
congratulations Nette on your much deserved win
Onna Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 2:57 AM
Deep expression of psycho-societal strains which many of us may ignore. You created a brave image of how people control others.The last lines were so powerful--- a remarkable poem as usual, Nette!
Gasun Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 1:30 AM
Excellent write for the contest this is my very dear friend Nette! Thank you so much for sharing! Stopping by also to greet you and your loved ones a very Merry Christmas! Wishing you all the best this wonderful season. May I take also this chance to thank you for your precious time to read one of my latest poems and your sweet comments. Sorry for being late here coz of my flu. Was w/ my dr. this morning. So stoppin by before takin my nap. I'll be back soon. Many hugs! love lots, Leonora
Kayode Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 11:27 PM
This is creative nette and i love it,merry Christmas and goodluck in the contest...huggs
Macfarlane Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 8:39 PM
Excellent write Nette, love the surprising dark ending. Merry Christmas and all the best in the new year. Hugs
May Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 7:44 PM
Love the twist ending .... Have a wonderful Christmas
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 5:13 PM
Creative work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..I can just see those polka dotted clowns upon the wires dancing on command of the puppeteer..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Fleming Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Powerful imagery combined with an undercurrent of sadistic evil and dark desires...rather disturbing!! :) john.
Lalion Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 2:50 PM
Nette, so thought-provoking leading to a big twist come ending. I envy your talent, great poetess and queen of imagery. Feliz Navidad!
Parker Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 2:46 PM
my first thought was ..unexpected ending but very profound...good luck my friend
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