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Tugging the Strands

The master forces his clowns to laugh when polka dots become the wearers. An audience roars…a pained choreograph; behind the scene, the wounded howl tears. What man is he who tugs the moppet strands? Twisting acts at whim for raunchy tricks and controlling moves through strict demands, only to bruise the shame he inflicts. The crowd hollers as he waves the rope Oh master gloats; new slapstick begins. Hushed are the young mimics just to cope, till one bawls ,” please Dad, we are your kin.” John Lawless' Puppets Contest by nette onclaud 12/25/2014

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Date: 12/30/2014 9:51:00 AM
Brenda is right; too many parents do mistreat their children like puppets. Congratulations on your win Blessing and a Happy New Year Nette 7
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Date: 12/30/2014 9:49:00 AM
Brenda is right; too many parents do mistreat their children like puppets. Congratulations on your win Blessing and a Happy New Year Nette 7
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Date: 12/30/2014 7:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 12/29/2014 3:44:00 PM
Shocking reality. Very sad reminder of to many households. Congratulations on your win Nette
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Date: 12/28/2014 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations Nette!
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Date: 12/28/2014 9:26:00 AM
Congrats nette.Love-rajat
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Date: 12/28/2014 9:21:00 AM
Nette, this is an awesome win. Congrats. Linda
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Date: 12/27/2014 3:50:00 PM
love how you drew this nette deep excellent pen dear pal
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Date: 12/27/2014 2:00:00 PM
A rather strong master pulls those strings, indeed. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/27/2014 1:22:00 PM
I found this quite chilling nette - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/27/2014 12:47:00 PM
Hi Nette, congratulations on your win! Very deep and so sad how this can happen in families...gave me goosebumps. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/27/2014 12:00:00 PM
Nette, thanks so much for participating in my first attempt at a contest. This is a chilling write and sadly all to frequently real to too many.
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Date: 12/27/2014 11:51:00 AM
congratulations Nette on your much deserved win
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Date: 12/27/2014 2:57:00 AM
Deep expression of psycho-societal strains which many of us may ignore. You created a brave image of how people control others.The last lines were so powerful--- a remarkable poem as usual, Nette!
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Date: 12/26/2014 1:30:00 AM
Excellent write for the contest this is my very dear friend Nette! Thank you so much for sharing! Stopping by also to greet you and your loved ones a very Merry Christmas! Wishing you all the best this wonderful season. May I take also this chance to thank you for your precious time to read one of my latest poems and your sweet comments. Sorry for being late here coz of my flu. Was w/ my dr. this morning. So stoppin by before takin my nap. I'll be back soon. Many hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 12/25/2014 11:27:00 PM
This is creative nette and i love it,merry Christmas and goodluck in the contest...huggs
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Date: 12/25/2014 8:39:00 PM
Excellent write Nette, love the surprising dark ending. Merry Christmas and all the best in the new year. Hugs
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Date: 12/25/2014 7:44:00 PM
Love the twist ending .... Have a wonderful Christmas
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Date: 12/25/2014 5:13:00 PM
Creative work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..I can just see those polka dotted clowns upon the wires dancing on command of the puppeteer..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 12/25/2014 3:18:00 PM
Powerful imagery combined with an undercurrent of sadistic evil and dark desires...rather disturbing!! :) john.
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Date: 12/25/2014 2:50:00 PM
Nette, so thought-provoking leading to a big twist come ending. I envy your talent, great poetess and queen of imagery. Feliz Navidad!
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Date: 12/25/2014 2:46:00 PM
my first thought was ..unexpected ending but very profound...good luck my friend
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