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Trying To Write

He beguiled me
 with his smile.........

Meanwhile:

Its a struggle to write;
inspite on my mind
 being all uptight
and alight 
with excitement
It's a plight
frought with
delight
when applied 
to provide sight 
that ignites 
being psyched 
to new heights
and reunites
rewrites 
priced into bytes
dispite 
providing a guide
to decide 
and set aside
my writing style...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/20/2024 11:31:00 AM
My issue is opposite. I can be doing something else and am feel compelled to write. I think I have a ghost writer. Your poems are an encouragement for fist writers and are well penned. I think the best poems come from what we feel, are passionate about. A theme or topic comes into my head and it is written before I get to the computer. I like the challenge of writing on a topic or word that someone else suggests. You should try it. Bet regards David in NZ
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Date: 9/15/2021 1:22:00 PM
I see I inspired you...expresses so well..
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Holly Bohto
Date: 9/17/2021 2:29:00 AM
visited your poems when I was contending with writers block..your poems are an inspiration. Thank you silent one.
Date: 9/15/2021 7:15:00 AM
One of my favorite styles, Holly, well done!
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Holly Bohto
Date: 9/17/2021 2:28:00 AM
Thank you james

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