trying to kill too many birds
Purple, polka-dot flamingos and buzzards
frolic near the sleeping volcano lake. It
wakes and rumbles, crumbling the Haunted Mansion!
~~Driving me Crazy
"Failed to nail it! Poetry errors glaring!
Stop pretending poetic metric knowledge!
Clearly Dear, you're too near the sun!"--Well, Pluck you!
Not for any of the contests:
(Sleeping Volcano, Sapphic Stanza, Purple, Polka dot, Flamingos and Buzzards,
Haunted Mansion, Plucking the Poisonous Parrot )
Just for fun :)
January 16, 2019
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