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Trying To Kill Too Many Birds

Purple, polka-dot flamingos and buzzards frolic near the sleeping volcano lake. It wakes and rumbles, crumbling the Haunted Mansion! ~~Driving me Crazy "Failed to nail it! Poetry errors glaring! Stop pretending poetic metric knowledge! Clearly Dear, you're too near the sun!"--Well, Pluck you! Poisonous Parrot! Not for any of the contests: (Sleeping Volcano, Sapphic Stanza, Purple, Polka dot, Flamingos and Buzzards, Haunted Mansion, Plucking the Poisonous Parrot ) Just for fun :) January 16, 2019

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Alexis Y.

Date: 1/23/2019 11:00:00 PM

Lol! PS, This is funny and entertaining. Not to mention so darn clever! I agree with Carolyn, she should each of the contest. If you do I think you would be on the winners list. Excellent job:-) Alexis

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/24/2019 9:26:00 AM

thank you Alexis. It was a bit of poetry therapy and a fun write :)

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 1/22/2019 10:02:00 PM

You hit the whole aviary! An impressive twist on poetry contests, P.S.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/22/2019 10:27:00 PM

Thank you Geoffrey. I appreciate your comment :)

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/18/2019 10:01:00 PM

Love it and understand it.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/18/2019 10:44:00 PM

O good! I am glad you liked it :)

Bobby May

Date: 1/18/2019 6:37:00 PM

WOW! P.S. you combined all of those into one, amazing my friend!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/18/2019 7:03:00 PM

thank you, Bobby :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/18/2019 12:16:00 PM

PS, you should enter it in ALL the contests. It's sooo creative and quite humorous as well. Enjoyed reading this immensely. A fave for me! Hugs, Carolyn

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/18/2019 12:28:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn. I was having trouble sleeping with all the contests in my head and this cured my insomnia :)

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 1/18/2019 11:37:00 AM

Funny! I can only say: 'non illegitimi te carborundum'! I always look forward to something from your magical pen (and magical heart)! This is great! Sometimes, you just have to stand up for your inner child!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/18/2019 12:57:00 PM

Thank you, Andrew. I am so glad you enjoyed this silly bit of nonsense :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2019 7:37:00 PM

hahaha. Sometimes I kill two birds with one stone but wow, you nailed quite a few here!!! love the pluck you line.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/17/2019 7:46:00 PM

so glad you liked it Andrea :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/16/2019 3:43:00 PM

Wow, this is so different, also delightful..

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/16/2019 4:23:00 PM

Thank you Harry!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/16/2019 3:27:00 PM

I like it that you threw together so many contests into one HILARIOUSLY fun poem! P.S. GREAT JOB!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/16/2019 3:42:00 PM

It truly came from a place of my brain spinning with all the contests... and imagining sticking one in more than one contest. Dear Caren I am so glad you found this and enjoyed it :)