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Trying Hard

desperate horse
wanted to be unicorn
stuck corn on forehead

** hahaha time pressure making me super silly with this 
July 27, 2010 written for pd’s Unicorn haiku contest :)

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De R

August 25, 2011 at 5:34 AM

Hahaha, so funny nikko! Poor horsy... Sure took a good laugh at this one! Cute!

Francine Roberts

August 4, 2010 at 9:29 PM

good job on your win in this contest with your funny entry

Joyce Johnson

August 4, 2010 at 2:16 PM

I wonder how he did tht with those hooves. Funny picture. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Connie Marcum Wong

August 2, 2010 at 10:37 PM

Nikko, The thought of visualizing this image made me laugh. It is simple, but so very cute. I loved it. Congratulations!

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

August 2, 2010 at 11:07 AM

Congrats on your win in P.D.s contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 2, 2010 at 9:33 AM

My congratulations to you on your win Nikko in (Destroyer((Poet's) contest "Unicorn Haiku". Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

August 1, 2010 at 9:07 PM

congrats on your win in the contest. Harry

Joyce Johnson

August 1, 2010 at 7:16 PM

Enjoyed the humor Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 1, 2010 at 6:44 PM

Congrats Nikko on your first place win in P.D.'s contest with this original and unique write ..very creative with humor too.. enjoy your top spot my sweet friend.. with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

August 1, 2010 at 5:29 PM

I'm so happy you won HIGH with this cute one!! congrats, dear friend. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 1, 2010 at 5:26 PM

Congrats on the first place win

Poet Destroyer A

August 1, 2010 at 4:39 PM

Nikko, Congratulations on your entry..lol..hey i really like this one,,haha even though it was mighty silly.Have a nice one,..p.d.

Lynette Chachere

July 31, 2010 at 9:51 PM

haha, sad.but so funny(: i can imagine how ridicoulous that would look. btw, i know i've been gone for a while, and apparently missed some things. but im back, and happy to read! hope you're great, Nikko. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Andrea Dietrich

July 28, 2010 at 7:09 PM

nikko, actually I find YOURS here to be very clever. I think it is gonna place high, you silly thing you. well, I think I caught up on comments now. I hope so. Time to see a few contests and then get outta here. Luv Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

July 28, 2010 at 6:50 PM

Hell Nikko,just stopping by to say hi,, and i am reading up where I left off..enjoyed this poem again,..p.d.

Gert W. Knop

July 27, 2010 at 6:27 AM

Sorry Nikko, I'm behind with my comments! Hahaha, nice write! So many people just do the same: Being someone else than they really are!!! Enjoyed your Haiku! At mabuti kapalaran sa ang kumpetisyon! ...TC...Gert

Sharon Tideswell

July 27, 2010 at 3:24 AM

haha, cute haiku Nikko, made me laugh out loud, could well be a winner ~ Sharon :)

Earle Brown

July 26, 2010 at 11:28 AM

This is funny.

Wilma Neels

July 26, 2010 at 11:25 AM

Ah, agent Nikko? Being silly? Sounds like fun :) btw don't you dare laugh for the pic I send you earlier today hehe tc Wilma, all the best for the contest :)

Poet Destroyer A

July 26, 2010 at 11:13 AM

ha ha ha ha that is cool,,i like it,, reminds me of my Unicorn Limerick,,, so we think alike when it comes to silly,,good one Nikko,..p.d.

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