Try To Succeed

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I have this one posted with an illustration on my site at https://lineswithlines.com/try-to-succeed/ Check it out if you have a minute. I am posting almost every day at lineswithlines.com and Instagram, too! Thanks for your support! —Cary

It’s not enough to be capable;
you have to be willing to try.

This simple idea got Neil to the moon
and helped Orville and Wilber to fly.

They worked and they toiled and they never gave up,
even though they occasionally failed…

They stayed on their feet and kept thinking it through,
even when things broke down and derailed.

So that is the rule, it is simple as that,
It’s just about all that you need;

no matter what it is that you think you can do,
you first have to try to succeed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/28/2018 8:40:00 PM
Hello Cary, a wonderful poem with good advice. I agree Always try... It is a good rule to follow. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Cary Snowden
Date: 8/1/2018 11:05:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene! I appreciate the note and thank you for reading! -Cary
Date: 6/13/2018 5:25:00 PM
Always try, and if you don't succeed try again, loved your rhyme. Mick
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/13/2018 6:04:00 PM
Thanks Mick; I'm trying! ;-) -Cary
Date: 6/13/2018 2:18:00 PM
Good philosophy and great poem.
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/13/2018 3:25:00 PM
Thank you, Sylvia! I'm glad you liked the idea. -Cary
Date: 6/13/2018 11:15:00 AM
A lovely instructional rhyme! Encouraging!
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Cary Snowden
Date: 6/13/2018 12:11:00 PM
I'm encouraged by your note, Kim! Thank you! -Cary
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