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Try This Game Everyone

Please read what I wrote and add the next stanza Anyone and everyone welcome Please write in the first person ie:I My Advice I read a poem, yesterday About just made me cry This person wrote They frighted one day they'd die I said hey buddy, You know, you only have to close your eyes And when you open them again You're gonna get a big surprise

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Cona Adams

Date: 1/5/2015 7:51:00 AM

You might be in Paradise You might be down below Or stuck on a shelf somewhere between. The only way you're gonna know, You simply have to close your eyes. Some people truly hate them, But I love a big surprise!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2014 12:34:00 PM

Jerry, If I were not rushing to get off here, this would be fun!! I just came to tell you that I am enjoying the entries to your contest. You sure picked a great theme. and have a merry christmas.

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/25/2014 6:09:00 AM

Thanks Andrea--Merry Christmas

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/24/2014 9:13:00 AM

Merry Christmas Jerry.

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/25/2014 6:08:00 AM

Merry Christmas Richard

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/24/2014 9:10:00 AM

Dead ain't dead it was just a goodbye. For when your eyes open you will be on high. No more sinking feeling, you'll be able to fly. All your questions answered, death is but an elaborate lie.

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/25/2014 6:10:00 AM

and sometimes life seems like a joke