Try This Game Everyone

Please read what I wrote and add the next stanza
Anyone and everyone welcome
Please write in the first person  ie:I


My Advice 

I read a poem, yesterday
About just made me cry
This person wrote
They frighted one day they'd die
I said hey buddy, 
You know, you only have to close your eyes
And when you open them again
You're gonna get a big surprise

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Date: 1/5/2015 7:51:00 AM
You might be in Paradise You might be down below Or stuck on a shelf somewhere between. The only way you're gonna know, You simply have to close your eyes. Some people truly hate them, But I love a big surprise!
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Date: 12/24/2014 12:34:00 PM
Jerry, If I were not rushing to get off here, this would be fun!! I just came to tell you that I am enjoying the entries to your contest. You sure picked a great theme. and have a merry christmas.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/25/2014 6:09:00 AM
Thanks Andrea--Merry Christmas
Date: 12/24/2014 9:13:00 AM
Merry Christmas Jerry.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/25/2014 6:08:00 AM
Merry Christmas Richard
Date: 12/24/2014 9:10:00 AM
Dead ain't dead it was just a goodbye. For when your eyes open you will be on high. No more sinking feeling, you'll be able to fly. All your questions answered, death is but an elaborate lie.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/25/2014 6:10:00 AM
and sometimes life seems like a joke
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