Try the Apple Pie

When Adam and Eve
Set up house down in Eden
With do-it-yourself
They had no time for breedin

Expansion was slow
Hardly bothered to try
But took off when Eve baked up
That first apple pie

8 December 2019
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Allison Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 2:10 PM
this is so amusing Geoffrey! Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
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December 24, 2019 at 9:37 AM
I Love this, Geoffrey.. Especially the last line. Great write my friend. Congratulations on your win and Happy Holidays to you and your family. Charlie
Brewer Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 10:15 PM
Thank you, Charles. Wishing you a Happy New Year.
Dietrich Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 3:23 PM
this was really a delight!
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December 13, 2019 at 12:17 AM
Delighted to have your response, Andrea
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December 8, 2019 at 1:54 AM
lol.. Funny.. Nice poem..
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December 13, 2019 at 12:15 AM
Thank you, Jenish
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