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When Adam and Eve Set up house down in Eden With do-it-yourself They had no time for breedin Expansion was slow Hardly bothered to try But took off when Eve baked up That first apple pie 8 December 2019

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Date: 12/26/2019 2:10:00 PM
this is so amusing Geoffrey! Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/24/2019 9:37:00 AM
I Love this, Geoffrey.. Especially the last line. Great write my friend. Congratulations on your win and Happy Holidays to you and your family. Charlie
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/25/2019 10:15:00 PM
Thank you, Charles. Wishing you a Happy New Year.
Date: 12/12/2019 3:23:00 PM
this was really a delight!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/13/2019 12:17:00 AM
Delighted to have your response, Andrea
Date: 12/8/2019 1:54:00 AM
lol.. Funny.. Nice poem..
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/13/2019 12:15:00 AM
Thank you, Jenish

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