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. oooooo ooooo ooo ooo oo oo o *********************** ******************************** ************************************** ***************Would you like to try************ ***************A piece of my apple pie*************** *************It’s really quite a treat************* **********As it tastes so very sweet********* *******Come on now, take a bite****** *****Let me know of your delight***

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Date: 11/16/2009 4:14:00 PM
Ok I dub you concrete not shape since it a poem about a pie in the shape of a pie. Please enter this in my Oh what a shape I'm in Contest. Pretty please with vanilla ice cream!
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Date: 1/16/2009 6:53:00 AM
You have an eye for this form Michael.I can see a niche 'a'cooking' Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/5/2009 12:48:00 PM
Clever little piece..I'm with Christie..something else is going on here...smile. BG
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Date: 1/5/2009 8:12:00 AM
Ummmm...how could we resist???!!! Love the form!!!!!! Love too..the bubbles of steam coming out the top! (Does that have anything to do with Christie and Kristen's comments??) :) Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/5/2009 5:15:00 AM
PLEASE, yes! Send it airmail - priority - overnight it to me! lol Yummy, my most fave pie!!! And Christie, get your mind outta that gutter, girl! lol love, Kristin
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