Michael Degenhardt Poet Shape

Try My Pie

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    ***************Would you like to try************
***************A piece of my apple pie***************
   *************It’s really quite a treat*************
       **********As it tastes so very sweet*********
            *******Come on now, take a bite******
               *****Let me know of your delight***

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Debbie Guzzi November 16, 2009 at 4:14 PM Ok I dub you concrete not shape since it a poem about a pie in the shape of a pie. Please enter this in my Oh what a shape I'm in Contest. Pretty please with vanilla ice cream!

Brian Strand January 16, 2009 at 6:53 AM You have an eye for this form Michael.I can see a niche 'a'cooking' Rgds Brian

Barbara Gorelick January 5, 2009 at 12:48 PM Clever little piece..I'm with Christie..something else is going on here...smile. BG

Carrie Richards January 5, 2009 at 8:12 AM Ummmm...how could we resist???!!! Love the form!!!!!! Love too..the bubbles of steam coming out the top! (Does that have anything to do with Christie and Kristen's comments??) :) Love, Carrie

Kristin Reynolds January 5, 2009 at 5:15 AM PLEASE, yes! Send it airmail - priority - overnight it to me! lol Yummy, my most fave pie!!! And Christie, get your mind outta that gutter, girl! lol love, Kristin