Try Me

Pop there goes my gun and the love, 

it no longer exist, You
messed everything up with being a little to rude. 

Your body is trying to make it, breath the air I breath, but 
the wound got you delirious dizzy and out of it.


You played me now its my turn to punish you.

I tryed to embracec your sympathy but you made me turn 
into 

a evil destroyer so how do want to live your life misable or 
dead 

Lay your head on my pillow let me heal you slowly anit till 
you no how to treate a good woman beautifully.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Smalling Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Potential means that we grow, execution means that we know. We grow to fall in love, and know when its time to go ... thanks for the privilege of reading your work. Have a blessed journey ... into the world of feelings and poetry, Te'Arra
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 9:13 AM
A pleasure to read your creative poetry today Te'arra. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
A  Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 7:50 PM
TE'ARRA, DEEP, SAD, AND AMAZING, A WONDERFUL POEM TO READ! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace