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" WISHED TRUTH TO KNOW" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 02 JULY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

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There was once a man that wished truth to know His heart and soul with knowledge to glow Studied every single day Whatever found on his way Soon he found out in wisdom couldn't grow! © Demetrios Trifiatis 02 July 2017

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Date: 7/7/2017 8:36:00 PM
Sad but true.
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Date: 7/3/2017 3:14:00 AM
A great truth dear Demetrios, Books don't give us wisdom it just gives us knowledge - very clever and wise my friend...Maria
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Date: 7/2/2017 4:37:00 PM
;) luvd it..thank you
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Date: 7/2/2017 6:03:00 PM
Thank you dear, Talin for your lovely visit! So nice to see you!
Date: 7/2/2017 4:35:00 PM
now that is not a funny limerick but it makes us reach the conclusion that the fellow should have been practicing what he was learning!
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Date: 7/2/2017 6:15:00 PM
Is not funny? Should it be? In philosophical circles it could be hilarious my dear, Andrea, hahaha! Here what I say is that one that learns a lot of things it doesn't mean that he is wise as well! As far as the Limerick form is concerned, although basically is a form to express humor it doesn't exclude serious writing. Does it? I have seen many serious Limericks! To conclude the "fellow" practiced his learning at the moment he realized he could not be wise just by learning what others have written! Probably, your comment is "a message to be deciphered" in that case I give up! Thank you for your visit dear friend! PS: You say "makes us reach..." who is "us" does it mean all those who have visited or "us" means only you? God bless you!
Date: 7/2/2017 8:06:00 AM
- Great truth in your limerick, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/2/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thank you so very much dearest, Anne-Lise for your lovely visit and comment! Hugs
Date: 7/2/2017 6:08:00 AM
Enjoyed the Limerick ... Very clever ...
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Date: 7/2/2017 6:29:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend, Probir! Why ...shorter than before? haha!
Date: 7/2/2017 2:51:00 AM
Very clever limerick Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/2/2017 6:31:00 AM
You are the expert my dearest, Jan! Thank you for your lovely visit! Hugs xxx
Date: 7/2/2017 1:49:00 AM
A very clever limerick, Demetrios! One filled with truth too! I hope you are keeping cool
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Date: 7/2/2017 6:32:00 AM
Well my friend, WW for me is more important the message than the style! Thank you very much my friend!

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