Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Tanka

Trust Me - Tanka

Dejected in love
                         I act in defiance of,
                          yet face the music
                      Why not look into my face,
                      Embrace panoptic passion !  







One tanka - 5/7/5/7/7
Written on 19/4/14
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Now for contest ' Just one Tanka- old and new' by Alfred Vassallo
Entered on August 28th, 2014

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Carolyn Devonshire April 29, 2014 at 2:41 PM Dear Dr. Upma, You have quite a talent for creating a mood with your words. You will now join my favorite poets. I can relate to these words. Congratulations on your win! Best Wishes, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick April 28, 2014 at 11:13 AM Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Joyce Johnson April 27, 2014 at 7:43 PM I learned a new word. congratulations on a great tanka. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2014 at 7:15 PM aha, there you are again, on the winners' list!! Congrats to you, dear.

Dr.Ram Mehta April 27, 2014 at 7:36 AM A brilliant piece made you win, congrats, Dr. Upma Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 27, 2014 at 7:53 AM Thnx Dr Ram !

Poet Destroyer A April 27, 2014 at 1:56 AM Dr Umpa, awesome, winning tanka.... congrats on your super win. ... xox~ LINDA Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 27, 2014 at 7:52 AM Thnx Linda !

Paul Callus April 24, 2014 at 8:44 AM Love that "panoptic passion" ... nothing hidden; sort of 'you get what you see!' no hidden agenda. gl in contest. // paul Paul Callus April 25, 2014 at 4:37 AM I like it when I get a further explanation from the author...writers like feedback, but so do the readers! Txs DR. Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 24, 2014 at 10:31 PM Panoptic passion - i meant my passion is so visible n evident all around everywhere, i was ensuring my beloved who still was dejecting me, to believe in me ,,,, so i said open up eyes of ur mind boy,, why cant u see its so very visible ,, n once u see , u shud rather embrace,,,,,,, So happy to hv ur kind comments, cud not resist replying again, i love to elaborate Paul ! Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 24, 2014 at 9:09 AM Pleasure it did fascinate u,,,thanks Paul,,,appreciate ur kind words n wishes,,thnx----/Upma/

Andrea Dietrich April 21, 2014 at 5:56 PM Seeing the WHOLE you!! Thanks for getting me to look up my new word for the day: panoptic!! good luck in the contest! Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 23, 2014 at 5:52 AM thanks Andrea,,, lovely comments,,, thanks for wishes too,,,,,/upma/

Sara Kendrick April 20, 2014 at 5:28 PM Reads like winning material to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the viisit to my page with congrats..Sara Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 23, 2014 at 5:53 AM Sara thanks a lot for the like n the wishes,,, lovely comments,,,/upma/

Carolyn Devonshire April 19, 2014 at 11:12 AM Dear Dr. Upma, A sad poem, but heartfelt and beautifully written. Love and blessings for a happy Easter weekend, Carolyn Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 23, 2014 at 5:54 AM thanks for passing by n liking this one Carolyn,,,/upma/

Joseph May April 19, 2014 at 9:36 AM Very nice tanka Dr... Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 23, 2014 at 5:53 AM thanks Joseph