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Trust Me Baby This Is Love

One beautiful night you were standing there On the other side of the dark pathway I started to go over do I dare? I try to think of words to maybe say The moonlight makes your black hair look frozen Wait no! What type of shocking line is that? With the lack of light your eyes look sunken I should just go and slink off as a cat! He turned his head finding my nervous gaze Gave me a smile I could barely see Making my silly heartbeat start to raise I returned his smile to show my glee He said would it be wrong my little white dove If I said trust me baby this is love 22/06/2017

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Date: 7/10/2017 9:10:00 PM
Lovely sonnet, good luck in the contest. ~*
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Date: 6/28/2017 8:13:00 PM
Gorgeous Sonnet, Phoenix! You really captured the feeling of falling in love. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 7/7/2017 7:20:00 PM
Thx :)
Date: 6/22/2017 6:19:00 PM
Nice sonnet, Phoenix. Good luck:)
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 6/23/2017 7:41:00 PM
This is the first time I've ever wrote a sonnet

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