Truly Alive

born once again and truly alive!
a newfound bounce to once tired steps,
easy smile on that old, weathered face;

gone is the young boy careless and free,
in comes a man who had seen better days,
his testament, brittle and creaking bones;

wracked by the passage of the years,
wrinkles and greys his badge of honor,
yet irreverent still to laugh at it all;

nagged by every sign of wear and tear
but not wishing to return to a zesty past,
just loving each morning like it is his last;

yeah, born once again and truly alive,
a newfound bounce to once tired steps,
into my dancing shoes, off to the ballroom!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Williams Avatar
September 23, 2008 at 2:33 PM
yes those dancing shoes loved this poem.
Buys Avatar
September 12, 2008 at 8:28 AM
Sorry if I am late, but a very happy birthday, hope you had a wonderful day. Hope the new year is filled with laughter and lots of dancing. Love Heidie
Mason Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 4:39 PM
For a wonderful birthday waltz, no doubt ... lol ... great write here my friend. Nice to be back reading and commenting however my writing seems to have ground to a halt for awhile. Its nice to begin to learn how to navigate the New Soup ... smile ... and I'm so glad you are still here ... I've always enjoyed your writing, Fred. All the best from Ms. Sue & Mister too ...
Winter Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 1:29 PM
OMG - Sean you are soooooo funny!!! Ok, now back to my comment. Fred, this is such a happy poem. I'm sorry - all I see now is you in Speedos dancing for Riverdance! Muahahahaha! I'm sorry! Great poem Fred - happy birthday and many more! xoxoxoxo Love, Shar
Kelly Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 12:29 PM
Whaaat !! ... Birthday Boy ???? .... Freddie , now that you have the dancing shoes on , let me organize an audition for " Riverdance " , especially for you .... Be sure , also to bring your Speedos , as it will be in the shallow-end ....
Reynolds Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 10:02 AM
Woohoo! A birthday boy, eh? Well, a big old birthday happy happy to you, now get those dancing shoes on, and tippity-tap all the way to an awesome day. Yeah, that was corny - so what?! lol Cheers, Kristin
Winter Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 8:42 AM
I will come back to comment on this Fred. Only have time right now for a quick, but truly from the heart, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! xoxoxoxo Big hugs, Shar
Babcock Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 8:33 AM
That's our boy, back, ready to get into his dancing shoes or is it his cowboy shoes . Glad the bounce is back Fred. God Bless Phyl
Kelly Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 7:56 AM
And praying that the band are playing a s l o w waltz .... Dance onnnnn Fred Astaire ... OOPS ( Derequito ) ...
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