Truffle Heaven

I take 
Sunrise in my hand
and let waterfalls
slip through

Cupping sun in my palm,
letting it spread over 
dark and gorgeous
bliss

bittersweet
embracing the sun,
enveloped by 
melting buttered warmth

fire comes into play
melding everything together

a swirl of yellow goodness
and brown desire
mixed with passion

then the wait begins...

...and ends

as chocolate love
is touched by
gentle hands

warmth oozes 
through hands
as love melts
quickly

so let it roll
in powdered softness

to break the fall...

irresistible~~!
take one bite 
of pleasure

just pure bliss
in 
chocolate 
truffle heaven~







06062011307

--nikko :)

for nette's anything handmade contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 6/13/2011 8:54:00 AM
Hi Nikko, paumanhin para sa hindi pagsulat para sa ganap ng isang oras ngayon! But My right arm and hand still bothers me much and is pinful, not to talk about my left shoulder. Thank you for you always kind comments. I am still not able to write much. Wow, great tribute to your abilities!! I baked a Swedish Apple tart and a Marble Cake for my visitors. Will let you know more in an email. Have a great new week! Love,Ingat, Gert and alles Gute!
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Date: 6/11/2011 10:47:00 AM
Dear Nikko, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Just knew this poem would do well in the contest. If you share your truffles, we'll both be wearing the hoola-hoop jeans. LOL I bet you have a great figure, but one thing is for sure -- YOU can cook! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/10/2011 12:30:00 PM
a very creative and yummy piece of poetry. thank you for commenting on Little Blue Eyes.
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:41:00 AM
love, the sun, and chocolate...take a bite and watch it melt.nice poem. jide
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Anything Homemade"contest Nikko. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 9:36:00 AM
My mouth watered through the entire process. I plan to bake today - a yellow cake. Haven;t tried one before. LOve, daver
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:02:00 PM
Nikko, for me this one was HEAVEN and a top notch poem!! Congrats on your win, and remember, if I ever get to see you there, I get TRUFFLES.
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Date: 6/7/2011 3:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 6/7/2011 12:21:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win in nette's contest with this excellent write. love, gautami
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Date: 6/6/2011 11:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win in nette's contest
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:39:00 AM
Many congrats on your delicious win, Nikko : )
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:57:00 AM
Congrats Nikko on your exciting success in Nette's contest with this fantastic creation in poetry sweets.. enjoy with luv.. we are home ..oh..
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, nikko
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:32:00 PM
WOW, what a way to do the contest, Nikko with a most imaginative spark. This has got to be a top poem or there is no justice!!
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Date: 6/5/2011 5:03:00 PM
oh so superb and now I want chocolate Nikko ..haha.. this is super amazing in content and for the contest ..much success my dear friend.. sure Nette will take off on this chocolate delight luv.. oh we are home again..oh..
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Date: 6/5/2011 4:54:00 PM
no! no! no!.. you could have made this delight in to chocolate haikus ... for my contest..lol... wow! I love this one .. really... You know I'm a nut-so when it comes to truffles in my ice cream... A very savor poem Nikko... I can almost taste the texture and bliss from your poem.. mmm like cake... Here in Texas peeps ask me what is truffle ..lol... I tell them its a candy made in heaven, lol.. we are allowed to use our imagination. Since chocolate melts here fast. mmm Now i want dessert,..p.d.
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Date: 6/5/2011 3:02:00 PM
After reading this one, I am going to have to try a truffle..Enjoyed reading your expressive and creative work..Thanks for the kind review of my work,..Sara
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Date: 6/5/2011 2:25:00 PM
Absolutely delicious write, Nikko - I'm hungry now! Hope your tummy feels better soon - perhaps it's writing about all that chocolate!
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 6/5/2011 2:58:00 PM
oh! You might be right with that, Jack-- I think I need me some chocolate now because writing about it is not enough, lol :D
Date: 6/5/2011 1:08:00 PM
We have the first-place winner here, Nikko. I would be happy to trade you some fish for your truffles. (My tummy just growled.) The fishing trip went great!! I'm feeding five families with the fish I caught. Photos are on my blog. No need to wish you luck with this entry. Quality speaks for itself! Love, Carolyn
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 6/5/2011 1:50:00 PM
again thank you Carolyn for your vote of confidence in this write--- I checked out your photos-- amazing fishing trip! definitely looks like you had a wonderful time-- that truffle/fish swap sounds yummy!
Date: 6/5/2011 12:16:00 PM
Hehe, I could not help to smile when I saw where you were taking this one Missy :-) love it!!!.. Talking about chocolate, I seem to be getting one every week or so lol, good luck with this one, I for one would add it to the winner's list ;-) tc
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Date: 6/5/2011 1:48:00 PM
send them my way pretty please?? come on, share your chocolate stash!!! :D
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