Jared Pickett Poet Free verse

Truest Soul

"Ol' Friend"


                                       I look at you and I wish you could see,
                                                  the way that I see you,
                                                        so beautifully.
                                      I look at you and I wish you could know
                                                         what I think,
                                                         when I think,
                                                when I see you, I know.
                                 You are beautiful to me, my queen beside me.
         Head top to bottom ten toes and your heart, yours is the truest soul I've yet known.
                                   I'll pray to your idol, worship your strength.
                                               I don't need you forever, 
                                                  just give me tonight.
                                              Our symphonic love song,  
                                                    pleasure all night.
           Head top to bottom ten toes and a soul, your the freakiest woman I've yet known.
                                                   Kissing you gently, 
                                                  you kissing me back.
                                               In ways you torment me,
                                                    do you feel that??
             Head top to bottom ten toes and a soul, yours is the truest soul I've yet known. 


Jared Pickett
10/26/09
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Richard Pickett December 29, 2009 at 11:19 AM Another Awesome write here son.. I enjoyed it from beginning to end...Well done Son...Hey have you read your brother Joshua's work yet...It does run in the family...Love Dad

Brian Strand December 3, 2009 at 12:57 AM Like the kyrielle flavours Jared.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words today

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 9, 2009 at 10:53 AM Very romantic and stirring with your verses, Jared, and I so like the imagery too... she must be very special, indeed... good job and excellent write... thankxxx for your comments on my tribute poems... want to express to those who welcomed me into the Soup family how much I appreciated their taking time to "show me the rope".. hope we can also be friends... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinair" and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart" per HGarvey Daniel Esquire.. check out his "Daffy Definitions" fun..

Carolyn Devonshire November 2, 2009 at 4:04 PM You have such a romantic quality in this love poem. I enjoyed the meter, but the way you adore this woman seems almost magical, like she is truly your "queen." Beautifully composed, Jared! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser October 28, 2009 at 2:54 PM Lovely piece Jared, it oozes love and passion >> James

Debbie Guzzi October 28, 2009 at 12:59 PM nice to be so in love! Light & Love

Charmaine Chircop October 27, 2009 at 1:37 PM i hope she could feel that..cos these verses are so special not to be heard,this verse is beautiful'Head top to bottom ten toes and a soul,its so sweet,,,giong to my favs..i love it..Charma

Carol Sunshine Brown October 27, 2009 at 4:03 AM Jared, what an excellent write. Thank you for sharing . Love, Carol

Raul Moreno October 26, 2009 at 9:23 PM Great work Jared, to me this read like a lyric. I like how you put this together, overall excellent work...Raul

Marty Owens October 26, 2009 at 8:28 PM Nice...enjoyed reading...Marty