Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Quatrain

Notes About The Poem

- True Love Never Dies Or Lie -

As time flows gently by and we grow old in each other's arms
Sailing away on our memories each rising sun seems brighter 
I love the way you look at me forever young like in our teenager years 
Holding the limelight of an adoring beauty captivates the soul supreme 

Your eyes still shine with the sparkle of diamond blue skies
Each passing new moon our destiny beyond the milky way beckons 
I love you most of all, it's no lie
Faraway in a universal dream fulfilled 

Not only my lover, you were my best friend too
United under one flag upon the fig tree a dove sings 
Every minute I think about what we have done together
Such blessings embrace even the smallest dewdrop kisses 

Our love for each other has always been true touched by your divine presence  
An offerings laid before your temple kneels  adoringly 
Can you remember the song that was our ballad royal 
When we danced cheek to cheek breathing within your air 

Only  then in a silent warm closeness breathless whispers 
Did I believe in you who skipped inside each heartbeat 
Realizing  in the second beat how much I care glowing with desire 
You are my oxygen as I breathe as one song singing warmly in your air 









A Collaborated Poem 
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 
01.06.2016
(unrhymed Quatrain)
Copyright © All Rights Reserved

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

1 2

Tonye George June 30, 2016 at 8:06 AM sunshine that was amazing! thumps up Anne-Lise Andresen June 30, 2016 at 10:38 AM - Tonye, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Arnone June 18, 2016 at 5:57 AM Beautiful, passionate declaration. Only one caveat: In the first line, I believe the word bye should be spelled, by.... Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2016 at 1:09 PM ... and no one else has "seen" it ..... thanks my friend, Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Walter T. Ashe June 13, 2016 at 4:40 PM Wow! This is a "Lovers" poem all the way!!! This is "read and feel!" Beautiful Anne-Lise and Liam! :-) Anne-Lise Andresen June 14, 2016 at 7:40 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Walter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Verlena S. Walker June 10, 2016 at 12:40 PM Such fulfillment should be capture via poetry or a poem. Enjoyed... VERLENA Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2016 at 1:14 PM - Glad you enjoy it, Verlena :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilyn Williams June 9, 2016 at 3:16 PM Romantic indeed. And just as touching. Congrats for your POTD. Marilyn Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2016 at 3:39 PM - Marilyn, thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock June 9, 2016 at 1:00 PM Love the romantic collaboration by you two. Makes my heart go ahhhh. AWESOME. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2016 at 3:40 PM - Glad you enjoy it, Phyllis :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter June 6, 2016 at 10:34 AM Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam! Wow!Congratulations to you both on POTW!A most very beautiful outstanding collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!You both deserve this great honor.I' m so very extremely happy for you two.Well done!Just awesome!Enjoy your whole week!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen June 6, 2016 at 11:39 AM - Dorian, thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance June 6, 2016 at 8:35 AM Congratulations Anne-Lise and Liam on another wonderful poem of the week feature :) Anne-Lise Andresen June 6, 2016 at 11:38 AM - Thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits, Casarah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior June 6, 2016 at 8:14 AM Congrats on POTW...very well done...the both of you...god bless...^WW^ Anne-Lise Andresen June 6, 2016 at 11:37 AM - Thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits, Winged :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angeline Haikutwinkle June 6, 2016 at 12:03 AM Liam is certainly a man with a Big Heart. When a poet's writings can smoothly incorporate into another poet's writings, it's truly a clever skill. I can almost recognize hints of Liam's footprints in this lovely collaboration ;) well done for POTW Anne-Lise Andresen June 6, 2016 at 11:36 AM - The one who knows Liam knows he has a big heart :) - I greatly appreciate our friendship :) - Thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits, Angeline :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jesse Day June 5, 2016 at 9:14 AM Enjoyed the romantic tone in your work - very passionate. Displays a beautiful heart. Congrats on the Poem of the Week recognition! - Jesse Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2016 at 11:22 AM - Thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits, Jesse :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith June 5, 2016 at 8:17 AM Great collaboration Anne-Lise and Liam, congratulations on POTW honors and its tribute to love... Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2016 at 11:22 AM - Thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman June 5, 2016 at 7:36 AM Best Congratulations Anne-Lise and Liam on the POTW honor!! Very Well-Done!! This is indeed a quite beautiful and enchanting write. "True Love" makes the world go round!! Cheers and Best, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2016 at 11:21 AM - Thank you for congratulating on our P.o.t.W. and visits, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ebbs June 4, 2016 at 1:50 PM A poem close to my heart, a very lovey poem Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen June 4, 2016 at 1:59 PM - Glad you enjoy it, Edward :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun June 4, 2016 at 8:01 AM A very wonderful romantic poem my dearest friend, Anne and Liam! A perfect 7++ for each of you. Loving it and I'd immensely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for sharing! A blessed weekend! love lots and big hug, GL Anne-Lise Andresen June 4, 2016 at 12:05 PM - Leonora, thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux June 3, 2016 at 8:35 AM You and Liam write so well together!! Hugs Rick. Anne-Lise Andresen June 3, 2016 at 10:34 AM - A pleasure to joining pens With, Liam :) - Richard, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2016 at 7:57 PM Very romantic collab. You two made sweet music together. Anne-Lise Andresen June 3, 2016 at 5:38 AM - Andrea, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane June 2, 2016 at 8:43 AM Superb write Anne-Lise and Liam, you described elegantly the essence of love. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2016 at 11:10 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Cecilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel June 2, 2016 at 4:19 AM A beautiful write:) Well done, Anne-lise and Liam:) Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2016 at 7:31 AM - Jo, thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid June 1, 2016 at 4:10 PM also thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments deeply appreciated wishing you all a blessing of a week filled with smiles

Demetrios Trifiatis June 1, 2016 at 4:07 PM A divine hymn to true love that grows prettier with the passing of years! Another marvel of a stunning collaboration. A seven to each of you dear, Anne-Lise and dear Liam! Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2016 at 7:30 AM - Demetrios, thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid June 1, 2016 at 4:07 PM anne lise thank you for the pleasure of joining pens with me your words sang a beautiful tune in this wishing you a blessing of a day dear pal Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2016 at 7:33 AM - Thank you, Liam :)

Bl Devnath June 1, 2016 at 4:03 PM True love never dies is absolutely true and no one can deny it. Lovely poem written with lovely heart's rhythm. Really enjoyed this beautiful poem. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2016 at 7:30 AM - Glad you enjoy it, Bl :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison June 1, 2016 at 3:35 PM such a tender romantic write Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx7 Anne-Lise Andresen June 1, 2016 at 4:36 PM - Jan, thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith June 1, 2016 at 1:19 PM A nice collaboration A-L and Liam. Anne-Lise Andresen June 1, 2016 at 2:25 PM - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

1 2