True Love

Seeing you for the first time
Brought a new light to my eyes.
It brought storms of color,
And cleansed my heart, full of lies.

It left me breathless.
It left me thinking about you.
The way you smile at me,
And your eyes, gleaming blue.

Perhaps this wasn't a mistake.
You're as pure as the color white.
Taking away my insecurities. 
Is this what true love feels like?

You're known very well
For being the true sweetheart.
It never seemed real, until now,
And you shine like beautiful art.

It seems risky to start an affair.
Everyone is always all over you,
And getting involved in your life.
They stick to you like glue.

I thought this wouldn't happen.
But, you came with your appeals,
And told me how you felt.
This is how true love feels.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 12/26/2017 12:17:00 PM
Hunter: Is this the "friend" mentioned in "Anxiety"? :o) It was fun to read and so filled with hope. :o) Keep them coming. Thanks for sharing with everyone on the soup. oldbuck
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Date: 12/5/2017 4:15:00 PM
Love this poem hunter it reminds me of me if you know what I mean(-;
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