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I wonder, is it the true love we seek, To touch her heart, before passion we speak? Yearning to witness pleasure in her eyes, Uniting hearts, a love that never denies. Wouldn't it be a love that transcends all, Submission born of mutual hearts' call? A love lasting forever, in tender embrace, Authentic connection, a timeless grace. It's the warmth of a touch, the sparkle in the eyes, The laughter that echoes, beneath starlit skies. It's the comfort of silence, when words are not enough, And the strength in a hug, when times get rough. True love is a symphony, played by two souls, In perfect harmony, their connection unfolds. It knows no boundaries, it breaks all chains, A love that endures, through life's joys and pains. True love is patient, understanding, and kind, It's a beacon of hope, in a world so blind. In the face of adversity, true love stands tall, It weathers the storms, and never lets us fall.

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Date: 9/23/2023 6:20:00 PM
A fabulous write with the perfect pic to go with it. Warmest congratulations on your win, Jay. A truly splendid write indeed
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Date: 9/23/2023 3:20:00 PM
Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win.
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Date: 9/21/2023 4:19:00 PM
A great Love poem, Jay. A FAV for my list, my friend. Your rhyming was perfect, and the words flowed together like the love of soulmates. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. I hope your week is going well. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 9/21/2023 12:44:00 PM
and so true this IS!
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Date: 9/21/2023 7:54:00 AM
This is lovely Jay. Your words are deep and meaningful. Inspirational. Best wishes SV
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Date: 9/20/2023 4:45:00 PM
Jay, your ability to construct this poem was remarkably innovative. The way in which you have intricately woven together words and imagery speaks to your immense creativity. Each line is a testament to the genuineness and beauty within your writing.
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Date: 9/20/2023 10:59:00 AM
Hello Jay, Yes this is so true. I am making it my fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
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Date: 9/20/2023 10:25:00 AM
- True and lovely written, Jay :) - hugs
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