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True Love

I wonder, is it the true love we seek, 
To touch her heart, before passion we speak? 
Yearning to witness pleasure in her eyes, 
Uniting hearts, a love that never denies.

Wouldn't it be a love that transcends all, 
Submission born of mutual hearts' call? 
A love lasting forever, in tender embrace, 
Authentic connection, a timeless grace.

It's the warmth of a touch, the sparkle in the eyes, 
The laughter that echoes, beneath starlit skies. 
It's the comfort of silence, when words are not enough, 
And the strength in a hug, when times get rough. 

True love is a symphony, played by two souls, 
In perfect harmony, their connection unfolds. 
It knows no boundaries, it breaks all chains, 
A love that endures, through life's joys and pains. 

True love is patient, understanding, and kind, 
It's a beacon of hope, in a world so blind. 
In the face of adversity, true love stands tall, 
It weathers the storms, and never lets us fall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Seeker Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 6:20 PM
A fabulous write with the perfect pic to go with it. Warmest congratulations on your win, Jay. A truly splendid write indeed
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September 23, 2023 at 3:20 PM
Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win.
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September 21, 2023 at 4:19 PM
A great Love poem, Jay. A FAV for my list, my friend. Your rhyming was perfect, and the words flowed together like the love of soulmates. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. I hope your week is going well. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 12:44 PM
and so true this IS!
Volumes Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 7:54 AM
This is lovely Jay. Your words are deep and meaningful. Inspirational. Best wishes SV
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September 20, 2023 at 4:45 PM
Jay, your ability to construct this poem was remarkably innovative. The way in which you have intricately woven together words and imagery speaks to your immense creativity. Each line is a testament to the genuineness and beauty within your writing.
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September 20, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Hello Jay, Yes this is so true. I am making it my fav. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
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September 20, 2023 at 10:25 AM
- True and lovely written, Jay :) - hugs
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