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True Love

Shall I roses, ruby hued Shall I trinkets, gem imbued Shall I words, in passioned mood Promise love, sincere and true? Shall I Cupid’s bow request Shall I darts in you impress Shall I pierce that perfect breast Just to prove I love you best? Not though heart should cease to beat Not though breath should be deplete Not though time should life defeat Could I love you more, my sweet No earthly flower, nor gift, nor sound Nor arrow … pledge love more profound

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Date: 6/11/2018 1:00:00 AM
Awesome poem -JT
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Brian Densham
Date: 7/8/2018 12:07:00 PM
Honestly - Thanks!
Date: 5/27/2018 11:07:00 AM
Wow! Beyond words of beauty. Poetically superb--wisdom only few possess: I am sure not a gift but earned with Life-stripes. No other way. Great write!
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Brian Densham
Date: 5/28/2018 10:17:00 PM
Well, thank you! Kind words indeed.
Date: 5/26/2018 6:52:00 PM
Brian...I like the originality of the repetitive sequencing...first expectant, then dismissive...nicely done!
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Brian Densham
Date: 5/27/2018 9:02:00 AM
Thanks. It's one of my fun poems.

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