Dakota Burroughs Poet Epic

True Life

I gotta life. 
You gotta life. 
He's gotta life.  
She's gotta life. 

I say I'm saved. 
You say your saved. 
He says he's saved. 
She says she's saved. 

My life is paradise. 
I say my life sucks. 
Your life is pretty good. 
You say your life sucks. 
His life is hard 
He says his life could be better 
Her life sucks. 
She says glade to be alive. 

Jesus had a life 
Jesus was saved 
Jesus was crucified

I died 
I went to hell 
You died 
You went to hell 
He died 
He went to hell 
She died 
She went to heaven 

I wasn't saved 
Devil owns me now 
You weren't saved
Devil owns you 
He wasn't saved 
Devil owns him now 
She was saved 
She's in the kingdom now 

Why people 
Save your soul 
B4 it's too late.

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Teddy Kimathi February 6, 2016 at 4:38 AM Greetings Dakota. Congrats for having your work featured in the poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)

Abdiel Rios February 2, 2016 at 12:07 PM I like the repetition sound of keep saying I , you , he , and she

Skat A February 1, 2016 at 5:20 PM Hello Dakota, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Skat A August 30, 2015 at 2:07 PM ;) SKAT

Poet Destroyer A August 26, 2015 at 1:00 PM Hi Dakota, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A August 25, 2015 at 9:56 PM Dakota, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT