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True Life

I gotta life. You gotta life. He's gotta life. She's gotta life. I say I'm saved. You say your saved. He says he's saved. She says she's saved. My life is paradise. I say my life sucks. Your life is pretty good. You say your life sucks. His life is hard He says his life could be better Her life sucks. She says glade to be alive. Jesus had a life Jesus was saved Jesus was crucified I died I went to hell You died You went to hell He died He went to hell She died She went to heaven I wasn't saved Devil owns me now You weren't saved Devil owns you He wasn't saved Devil owns him now She was saved She's in the kingdom now Why people Save your soul B4 it's too late.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/6/2016 4:38:00 AM
Greetings Dakota. Congrats for having your work featured in the poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/2/2016 12:07:00 PM
I like the repetition sound of keep saying I , you , he , and she
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Date: 2/1/2016 5:20:00 PM
Hello Dakota, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 8/30/2015 2:07:00 PM
;) SKAT
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Date: 8/26/2015 1:00:00 PM
Hi Dakota, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/25/2015 9:56:00 PM
Dakota, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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