True Hearts Beating

Where will I be twenty years from today?
The World is moving at such a fast pace.
Will I still look at love the same way?

Will I be able to look at your face?
That is my heart's greatest desire.
The World is moving at such a fast pace.

Now when I'm with you my heart is on fire.
I wish for my soul to still burn for you.
That is my heart's greatest desire.

My eyes may grow dimmer I know that's true.
A love so beautiful will never fade.
I wish for my soul to still burn for you.

Even if my body to death is laid.
That will never stop my true heart's beating
A love so beautiful will never fade.

The world may be fast sometimes defeating.
That will never stop my true hearts beating.
Where will I be twenty years from today?
I'll still be looking at love the same way!

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Manassian Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 10:20 AM
Richard...what a beautiful dream of a poem....a terzanelle....Oh...I'm so glad I found this. To my favorites....Just simply .......enchanting.....
Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Thanks Eileen! I like this one as well.
A   Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 10:47 AM
Richard, , Congratulations with your sweet Valentines poem *luv~PD
Gasun Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win on this lovely Valentines poem my dear friend, Richard !love/hugs, Leonora
Ivy D Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 8:33 PM
congrats :-) SandyIvy
Thorn Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 12:18 AM
AWESOME.....I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem.
Duncan Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 10:30 PM
nicely worded Richard ;}
Lamoureux Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 12:25 AM
Thanks Debbie
Ellison Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 7:05 AM
Absolutely beautiful, my friend! There is nothing more to say... love is eternal Warm wishes, Jake
Lamoureux Avatar
December 12, 2012 at 7:35 AM
Thanks Jake!
Kearley Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 8:49 PM
I really like this one Richard...It flows so well...Nice one!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 11:14 PM
Thanks Dan. I see you have another new Photo, the cool dude is back!
Macfarlane Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 1:27 PM
I'm sure you'll be looking at love the same way for eternity! A beautiful and lovely write Rick! Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 2:27 PM
Thanks Cecilia! Hugs back.
Horsman Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 10:10 AM
I can tell you one thing for sure... twenty years will be over in a blink of an eye, good poem, Richard, and yes keep that heart beating, and the pen writing...
Lamoureux Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 2:28 PM
Will do, you are right the last 20 evaporated pretty quickly.
Harrell Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 8:10 AM
Great poem, Richard. Thanks for inviting me. i normally don't enter contest but I did it for you. Enjoyed. Love ya, Toquyen
Lamoureux Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 8:17 AM
You are very sweet. Thanks as well for your comment.
A   Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 9:25 PM
Thank you Richard for the soup mail... I will share my thoughts with you tomorrow when i get home from work.. hope you are well... thank you for this poem..never seen this form on the soup... life makes me wonder always~~..pd
Lamoureux Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 9:41 PM
Yes very well, in an airport on my way home to my sweetie.
Widjanarko Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 8:56 AM
beautiful thoughts you have, I'm also wondering where will I be in next 20years from now :) hopefully we are in decent place and better life :) - hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 9:10 AM
sounds like a good plan!
Widjanarko Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 8:59 AM
It's a pleasure to be the first to comment :D
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