True Friendship Broken

The day that I lost you as a true friend
Is the day my world plummeted 
Into the darkness to where it came from
Your voice brought me hope
Now I no longer hear that melodious voice
Because I lost you as a true friend
No matter how much darkness 
Your spirit shined through 
And uplifted my saddened soul
Now the darkness has consumed me once again
Because your spirits left me 
The day I lost you as a true friend
People all the time try to make me happy 
But they were nothing like you
You were the one that kept my life going
But now that has been take from me 
And now my life is nothing 
The day that I lost you as a friend
Was the day a true friendship was broken
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 20, 2009 at 7:23 AM
long time no see brandeon i miss you guys out there in pickens i hope to c you all again later and nice work man
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March 27, 2009 at 3:59 PM
I can relate to your poem...be strong though... welcome to soupland! Ernesto
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March 27, 2009 at 11:52 AM
It's hard to loose a friend but hang in there they might find you again wheather here or above Good write I to have lost a friend
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