Robert Gorelick Poet Limerick

True Freinds

Our bodies are made of mostly salt water
That includes our spouse and rebellious daughter
I have a keen notion 
We belong near the ocean
With our true friends, the seal and the otter

Maybe that's why we holiday by sea  
Cause we are drawn to water naturally 
But where are our fins 
Flippers, tails and wings  
Are we all shoals or are we family?

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by Belle Bellevue

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Gershon Wolf November 14, 2022 at 6:16 PM For sure we do belong around H2O. I notice that I always feel better after a shower or a swim. ~ Water is Wetter Gershon Wolf November 15, 2022 at 7:10 PM It's that 'Eau de H2O' I dab on afterwards. ~ Victoria's Secrets Robert Gorelick November 15, 2022 at 5:54 PM I notice you smell better too!

Darlene De Beaulieu November 14, 2022 at 3:08 PM Hello Robert Gorelick, I yearn to be by the water. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu November 22, 2022 at 3:03 PM Hello Robert, yes so much water under the bridge. Enjoy your evening my friend. Robert Gorelick November 22, 2022 at 2:53 PM So much water under the bridge, Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu November 16, 2022 at 1:35 PM Hello Robert, yes the water can be healing. it can be a Bay, stream, a river, a lake. Or ocean or sea. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene Robert Gorelick November 15, 2022 at 5:54 PM The seaside can be very healing Darlene. Thanks for dropping by! Robert

Beryl Edmonds November 14, 2022 at 12:54 PM Maybe that's why we holiday by sea - 'Cause we are drawn to water naturally - But where are our fins - Flippers, tails and wings - Are we all shoals or are we family?…… Belle Robert Gorelick November 15, 2022 at 5:57 PM Another awesome appendage, Belle!