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True Confession

-------- It was a beautiful morning And a good trip to the Church ------ The Church Service's Were really good! But, Something happened Along the way, ------ This morning something Was Oh so different...... --- Instead of making a 'Tithing" I had to write an "IOU' GF DISCLAIMER: ***Never try this one at Home!

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2011 5:47:00 PM

luv it Gary...emphatic piece.. even tithing has become a squeeze but must pay the Lord first and foremost any way possible.. witty and fun and boy has it reached that far now luv.. a new fav in poetry and poet my friend in the pen..luv ..