True Blue Moon

These thoughts are crystal clear in feelings
towards a beautiful gem 
dazzling aurora of lighting color
falling into loves sweet 
everlasting touching a dream
The fondest memories come flooding back
walking along the golden sands 
with my dog buster 
him dancing around 
floating lovingly on natures breeze
Tears begin rolling down the face
looking skyward 
a full moon face in her pearly white attire
Winds blowing quite strongly across the ocean
touching inner humming whistles
Silver reflections of her face shine 
dancing in each and every single ripple
Light of truth is a burning torch
forever warm and loving 
forgiving always to the end
is this real I ask myself over and over
Watching you sleep smiling deep inwardly beautiful
putting my nose to your hair loving how it smells
for me baby the sweetest scent of you
Knowing smiles upon your angel face
this dream is it real pinching myself
Sleeping beauty I thought in that moment
A fairy tale breathing ever so slowly lowers and rises
deep gentle soft fluttering warm breaths
as i watch you sleeping 
One prize for a king who is lucky in love 


one I spent a while writing, finished it on a walk last night looking at a full moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 11/8/2014 9:18:00 AM
Each line is so beautifully expressed and penned, Liam.Your beautiful heart and words sing. Such a wonderful loving masterpiece.One can only wish upon the stars and the moon of heaven for a true love like that, my dear friend. Very romantic and passionate. I enjoyed it! Smiling here :) love and hugs! Xxxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/9/2014 11:30:00 AM
thank you dorian for the truly very beautiful comment the moon and stars are the souls of those i believe the eyes of love looking over us bless you dear friend have a blessed sunday
Date: 11/8/2014 5:03:00 AM
This is very beautiful Liam.The moon can be soinspiring dear friend,lovely!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/8/2014 5:29:00 AM
so sweet thank you so much yeah the moon sure can draw on the deepest feelings when alone dear friend bless you wonderful comment
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