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''True Blue'' Is the Key

I have been fooled many times before,
               hurt, and had my heart ravaged to the core;
  sadly, I have learned not to trust,
    and said 'bye to friends with disgust.
See, the problem with me is that I believe,
I am loyal, forgiving, much too naive;
yet, the end of friendship makes me grieve.
      I put all my faith in a friend.
      on me they can always depend;
      and I will forever defend.
             But, no more chances-  three,
             fool me ONCE and you go into the sea;
now, only "true blue" is the key,
                   but, friends lost still make my tears pour.

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August 14, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/"True Blue" is the Key
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1052-162-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Fool Me Once
sponsor, Brenda Chiri

Tenth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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La France Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 10:24 AM
Thank you Brenda for my placement and thanks to all who have left comments, appreciate~
Messina Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 5:49 AM
We all could be naïve at times. I as well. Excellent write Constance...Congrats on your win...Charlie
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 12:30 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 11:50 AM
I grow friendship slow. Yet with full foliage, a storm might sweep it away. I was careful with my friendship and glad it still exists. Some I tried to carry and they just swam away. I love this book I read called “Girlfriends” It spoke of different friendships. A hug for you as close as the touch of key. Love it by the way!!
Kiser Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 11:34 PM
They make mine pour, too. Well penned.
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