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True Abundance

One
told us,
learn from
the flowers 
and birds--
beautiful 
and
thriving--
with 
no cares

joyfully give
be content
love

two coats?
give one away


12/18/2018
Minimalism Premium Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Cecilia Hopkins-Drewer
~5th place

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/21/2018 6:14:00 PM Beautiful, and congrats for the win. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/21/2018 6:16:00 PM Thank you, Andrea:)

Line Gauthier Date: 12/21/2018 5:44:00 AM Back with well deserved congrats, PS. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/21/2018 6:09:00 AM Thank you, Line! Merry Christmas :)

Andrew Fairchild Date: 12/21/2018 1:11:00 AM It's so FUN, when somebody understands that abundance is a flow, prosperity is everywhere. I love 'two coats? give one away' Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/21/2018 6:08:00 AM Confident that all we need is provided, we can travel lightly. Thank you for your visit and encouragement! Blessings, my friend :)

Wren Rushing Date: 12/20/2018 10:28:00 PM Congrats on placement in contest! Well done P.S. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/20/2018 10:29:00 PM Thank you, Wren :)

Timothy Mcguire Date: 12/20/2018 9:54:00 PM Nice win P.S. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/20/2018 9:57:00 PM Thank you Timothy :)

John Lawless Date: 12/20/2018 9:39:00 PM Congrats on your placement in the contest P.S., an intriguing entry with a timely message Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/20/2018 9:47:00 PM Thank you, John :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/20/2018 6:14:00 PM Love the interplay of the title with the message in the last two lines. Congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/20/2018 6:23:00 PM Thank you Gershon, for your visit and kind words. :)

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer Date: 12/20/2018 4:31:00 PM Congratulations, a beautiful blend of theology and poetry. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/20/2018 4:57:00 PM Thank you Cecilia, for sponsoring this contest and for honoring my little poem! Happy Holidays!

Michelle Faulkner Date: 12/19/2018 4:17:00 PM Truly expresses the minimalism concept in a wonderful way, good luck with the contest! Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/19/2018 7:46:00 PM Thank you, Michelle :)

Wren Rushing Date: 12/18/2018 6:03:00 PM A lovely poem, So much wisdom in just a few words. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/18/2018 10:24:00 PM thank you, Wren :)

Line Gauthier Date: 12/18/2018 3:50:00 PM Wow - powerful message exquisitely delivered, PS. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/18/2018 10:24:00 PM thank you, Line :)

Timothy Mcguire Date: 12/18/2018 12:05:00 PM Love this poem! Well done Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/18/2018 9:28:00 PM Thank you Timothy :)

Heidi Sands Date: 12/18/2018 10:54:00 AM Excellent! Well written :) Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/18/2018 9:28:00 PM Thank you, Heidi :)