P.S. Awtry Poet Free verse

True Abundance

One
told us,
learn from
the flowers 
and birds--
beautiful 
and
thriving--
with 
no cares

joyfully give
be content
love

two coats?
give one away


12/18/2018
Minimalism Premium Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Cecilia Hopkins-Drewer
~5th place

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Andrea Dietrich December 21, 2018 at 6:14 PM Beautiful, and congrats for the win. P.S. Awtry December 21, 2018 at 6:16 PM Thank you, Andrea:)

Line Gauthier December 21, 2018 at 5:44 AM Back with well deserved congrats, PS. P.S. Awtry December 21, 2018 at 6:09 AM Thank you, Line! Merry Christmas :)

Andrew Fairchild December 21, 2018 at 1:11 AM It's so FUN, when somebody understands that abundance is a flow, prosperity is everywhere. I love 'two coats? give one away' P.S. Awtry December 21, 2018 at 6:08 AM Confident that all we need is provided, we can travel lightly. Thank you for your visit and encouragement! Blessings, my friend :)

Wren Rushing December 20, 2018 at 10:28 PM Congrats on placement in contest! Well done P.S. P.S. Awtry December 20, 2018 at 10:29 PM Thank you, Wren :)

Timothy Mcguire December 20, 2018 at 9:54 PM Nice win P.S. P.S. Awtry December 20, 2018 at 9:57 PM Thank you Timothy :)

John Lawless December 20, 2018 at 9:39 PM Congrats on your placement in the contest P.S., an intriguing entry with a timely message P.S. Awtry December 20, 2018 at 9:47 PM Thank you, John :)

Gershon Wolf December 20, 2018 at 6:14 PM Love the interplay of the title with the message in the last two lines. Congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon P.S. Awtry December 20, 2018 at 6:23 PM Thank you Gershon, for your visit and kind words. :)

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer December 20, 2018 at 4:31 PM Congratulations, a beautiful blend of theology and poetry. P.S. Awtry December 20, 2018 at 4:57 PM Thank you Cecilia, for sponsoring this contest and for honoring my little poem! Happy Holidays!

Michelle Faulkner December 19, 2018 at 4:17 PM Truly expresses the minimalism concept in a wonderful way, good luck with the contest! P.S. Awtry December 19, 2018 at 7:46 PM Thank you, Michelle :)

Wren Rushing December 18, 2018 at 6:03 PM A lovely poem, So much wisdom in just a few words. P.S. Awtry December 18, 2018 at 10:24 PM thank you, Wren :)

Line Gauthier December 18, 2018 at 3:50 PM Wow - powerful message exquisitely delivered, PS. P.S. Awtry December 18, 2018 at 10:24 PM thank you, Line :)

Timothy Mcguire December 18, 2018 at 12:05 PM Love this poem! Well done P.S. Awtry December 18, 2018 at 9:28 PM Thank you Timothy :)

Heidi Sands December 18, 2018 at 10:54 AM Excellent! Well written :) P.S. Awtry December 18, 2018 at 9:28 PM Thank you, Heidi :)