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Pyramids Poetry Contest

8/15/25

Joseph May

Truck

Truck
TRUCK haul things powerful before age sixteen learned to drive on a farm I thought I was really cool “my truck is a tool not a toy”
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Freie Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 4:24 PM
What a coincidence, I am the proud owner of a Chevy half-ton, short-bed, 4WD that I bought 30 years ago. I love it more today than I did at first... I'm lying, if she was a woman, I'd have married her 30 years ago.
Freie Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 10:10 PM
Or a good #@&$
Mckeithan Avatar
September 4, 2025 at 9:58 PM
Nothing like a good truck.
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 8:52 AM
Are you a farmer now, Oliver?
Mckeithan Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 9:14 AM
No. Lived and worked on them as a kid in the 60's. My wife and i live on 10 acres on a dirt road in northern Pa. We do have a small garden. I dont want to be a farmer. Too much work and not enough money.
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 8:51 AM
But I bet you had to trucks when a kid!! Cool one, Oliver. Congrats
Goldsmith Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 11:21 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Truck" write/tribute. What a great tool you have. Have a blessed day with your win...........
Mckeithan Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 2:21 PM
Thank you Paula. Appreciate your comments
May Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 4:57 PM
Very nicely penned Oliver, Congrats on your win
Mckeithan Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 2:21 PM
Thanks Joseph. Great contest
Greenhough Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 11:27 AM
This poem makes a fun tribute to vehicles. Mechanics get some credit too.
Mckeithan Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 1:07 PM
Thanks Hilda. They do
Rodrigues Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 7:00 AM
Nice! Like the quote!
Mckeithan Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 7:10 AM
Thank you Kim.
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