Troubling the Trouble

Troubling the trouble till it troubles, a trouble Tempted to trouble the trouble, now he is troubled To tell the tale of his test? I'd better leave him with the narratives The test of time, I'd stand doing whatever is true, noble, right and praiseworthy

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Harry Horsman

Date: 8/31/2022 1:34:00 AM

So clever the poet and the poetry.

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 10/11/2022 10:02:00 AM

Thank you, Harry. Lots of love

David Walker

Date: 8/27/2022 7:22:00 AM

Beautifully done alliterations. Smart... a very good read. Love it!

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 8/27/2022 7:54:00 AM

Thank you, David. Lots of love, Adeniji.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/27/2022 6:56:00 AM

The trouble is doing what is right and trustworthy doesn't gain us popularity, but it does gain us peace of mind my friend, well done, thankyou for sharing your insights :)

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 8/27/2022 7:57:00 AM

Your constructive evaluation is highly appreciated. Thank you dear Mystic Rose. Much love, Adeniji