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Troubled Waters

Dejected beyond the scope of life, Sat forlorn by herself in her room, Rejected now but once loved wife, downcast eyes speak her gloom! Blurry eyes still wet with memories, Search for a meaning of her being, Happiness filled her past diaries! Head in hands she cries kneeling! softness of touch, a hand on knee, An innocent smile greets her gaze, little hug from daughter aged three, Shines a light out of her dark maze. Life’s meaning, purpose, reason why, Over troubled waters she should fly! A tribute to Simon and Garfunkel’s ‘ Bridge over troubled waters!’ Written 11/05/2020 4th placement Poetry contest ‘ Bridge over troubled waters’ Sponsor John Hamilton

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Date: 5/21/2020 12:44:00 AM
I don't know how I had missed reading this one. Such a beautiful story blended into a sonnet, full of reviving hope and love. I could relate to it so well. Congratulations on your win Krish! I wish to keep reading your words. :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/23/2020 2:00:00 PM
Hi Aditi Thank you! Happy you like it. Great to have you as a friend in poetry soup!
Date: 5/20/2020 4:18:00 PM
Thanks Krish for your entry in my contest, congrats on a fine placement!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/20/2020 4:50:00 PM
Thanks John, delighted to be amongst the winners! A nice contest based on one of my favourite songs!

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