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Troubled Mind

Not a day goes by where your not missed, RIP mate, forever in our hearts. WHY COULDN’T WE SEE THE PAIN IN HIS EYES IF ONLY WE KNEW WHAT HE WAS FEELING INSIDE PLUMMENTING SO FAST ON LIFES EMOTIONAL RIDE LEAVING THE LOVE IN HIS HEART NO WHERE TO RESIDE. THIS WAS NO LIFE ANYONE SHOULD HAVE LIVED SEEING HIS OWN DEATH AS A GIFT SEARCHING SO HARD FOR THAT MENTAL LIFT PRAYING HIS DESOLATION WOULD FINALLY SHIFT. HE USED DRUGS TO TRY TO BLOCK IT OUT BUT THE VOICES IN HIS HEAD WOULD SCREAM AND SHOUT THERE WAS NO RELEASE FROM HIS INTERNAL GLOOM NO WHERE TO HIDE BUT IN HIS DEN OF DOOM. THE TIME HAD COME AND HE HAD MADE HIS CHOICE HE FINALLY SUCCUMB TO THAT CONTINUOUS VOICE AS HE TOOK HIS FINAL BREATH HE DIDN’T THINK TWICE THAT WAS THE NIGHT HE ENDED HIS LIFE. AS HIS PEACEFUL BODY HUNG THROUGH THE NIGHT OUT OF THE DARKNESS THERE CAME A LIGHT AN ANGEL STEPPED FORWARD ELEGANT AND BRIGHT TAKING HIM BY THE HAND FOR HIS FINAL FLIGHT WITH NO MORE UNHAPPINESS IN HIS LIFE.

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Date: 4/18/2018 9:25:00 AM
He will no longer be in any pain. Sad, beautiful poem Sam. Welcome to PS :)
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Sam Russell
Date: 4/18/2018 12:42:00 PM
Thanks very much pleasure to be here
Date: 4/14/2018 1:01:00 PM
Wow, another powerful poem here. Great work!
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Date: 4/14/2018 3:09:00 PM
thankyou christopher i apperciate your comments means alot.
Date: 4/13/2018 7:54:00 AM
Hello Sam, I am glad that the angel came to save him from his plight. Have a nice day my friend.
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Sam Russell
Date: 4/14/2018 3:09:00 PM
hi Darlene thanks you to

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