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Troubled Heart

In despair I cling to a barren oak 
As eve- long screams without any command; 
And though fingers grip blooms around my cloak
Doubt lingers on inside this heart quite bland--
Where misty  rain taps upon deadened leaves
That boughs quake on drizzles trickling slow, slow
Until  pale of anguish  the moonlight relieves:
Perhaps I sense fresh April winds that blow 
On a field of daisies growing plump roots--
Surely I could not weaken as life blesses
New springtime calling for hope, for pursuits--
My essence unleashing this dreariness.

 Now, the song of a thousand dappled beams 
 Empowers me as glittered morn redeems!




Bridge Over Troubled Waters Contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton  5/20/2020
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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 2:17 PM
Wow Nette, this poem is brilliant! Congratulations on your second placement! xxoo
Mishra Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 12:15 AM
Dropping by to congratulate you on your win Nette :)
Canerdy Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 5:42 PM
Such a beautiful sonnet, Nette--especially the couplet. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
Hamilton Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 3:58 PM
Only you Nette can write like this, I love your unique phrasing, has a special tone and cadence, almost melodic...a wonderful write, congrats on a fine 2nd place win!
Mcintosh Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 7:19 AM
This is quite beautifully expressed. I love the words~!!! Much love and blessings to you sweet lady, Gina
Mishra Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 12:25 AM
Blissful sonnet with all the blessings of joy. All the best Nette :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 5:21 PM
Beautiful sonnet Nette, good luck in the contest. Hope you're well Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 4:24 PM
A beautiful poem Nette. I think it is a winner in the contest.
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