Harry Horsman Poet Free verse

Troubled Experience

Why oh why, I have afflictions
regarding ever more increasing problems in
my indigenous language, a stigma of
diction and spelling, also grammar incomprehension.    
Never once could I seem able
to use correct adjectives, to embroider
to enlighten. So one gave English
the elbow, to entrap to ogle
the anatomy, belonging only to one’s
natural opposites, girls, innovative girls amorously.
This orchestration that organised female intrigue
wetted a growing appetite, for use
with one’s never ending troubled experience!

© Harry J Horsman 2013

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Poet Destroyer A March 3, 2013 at 9:18 AM Good morning Harry, congratulations with your awesome win..xox~PD

Kash Poet March 3, 2013 at 6:25 AM Excellent write Harry!Congrats on the win!

Joseph May March 2, 2013 at 5:59 PM congrats on your win Harry

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 2, 2013 at 1:00 PM big congratulations harry , i knew it would be a winner well done xx

Deborah Burch March 2, 2013 at 12:01 PM 'Arry!!! What a write!!! Well done!! Big Congratulations !!! Love ya deb

Debbie Guzzi March 2, 2013 at 11:24 AM A joyous tumult of words! Congrad's on your winning write.Light & Love

David Williams March 2, 2013 at 10:17 AM Harry, Congratulations on your placement in my contest, I just loved the idea of giving English the elbow, enjoyed this one a lot, well done...David

Roy Jerden February 10, 2013 at 6:09 PM Harry, your poetry is fascinating to me. Reading it is like trying to catch a butterfly with your hands. What's interesting about this one is that it is so untrue, or else that you're pulling our leg. I think it's the latter, you rascal! Cheers, Roy

Connie Gildersleeve February 5, 2013 at 12:54 PM English language crazy at best. A great write Harry. I totally agree with your thoughts of the English form. Warm Smiles, Connie

Bl Devnath February 5, 2013 at 10:38 AM Hay! Master, how are you? I agree with you totally. It happens to many. Rare gets less trouble, i think. You have expressed nicely about the troubled experience in English language. Loved always, bl

Lucilla Carrillo February 5, 2013 at 7:40 AM Harry; I like your poem, but troubled expirences - don't feel like the Lone Ranger, You are not alone. i was never that great in English. My best subjects were Science and Math, always got straight A's. Thanks for sharing.

Seren Roberts February 5, 2013 at 12:27 AM Mmmmmm troubled experience now that sounds exciting Harry. Haha. ...Seren

Andrea Dietrich February 4, 2013 at 11:05 PM oh Harry, I find it hard to imagine you having troubles with English OR the ladies. Your poetry is amazing and I saw that picture of you as a young man. Come on now!!! A very interesting poem!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 4, 2013 at 10:45 AM I find this quite humorous harry, I am rubbish at English but I could find some adjectives for female anatomy, I have a couple for male anatomy too xx

Mehnaz Veetil February 4, 2013 at 10:29 AM wish to share these thoughts ...lovely and great usages,Harry...

Donna Jones February 4, 2013 at 10:20 AM Well we feel the same way believe it or not if I got your message, anyway very cute...

Sara Kendrick February 4, 2013 at 9:38 AM Not sure exactly the proper interpertation but I got a sense of humor from this one..I am sure that you have some very good adjectives in one area of your vocabulary..Sara