Charles Messina Poet Sonnet

Trouble On the Bridge

Twice I read a note my wife left for me 
"Be home by four-thirty, love you" - she wrote 
Twice I read a note my wife left for me 
My wife said she loves me, she wrote a note 

Yesterday was my one-hundredth birthday 
Can I blow out the candles now; I think 
There is one slice of cake left on the tray 
Why are so many candles in my sink 

I think I'll make some eggs sunny-side up 
After, I read the left note from my wife 
Why is there no coffee-cream in my cup 
I will slice the cake with a butter knife 

I think my dementia disease doubled 
Just like a bridge over waters troubled
 

A Bridge Over Troubled Waters Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: John Hamilton 
5-13-2020

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Aditi Mishra May 21, 2020 at 12:50 AM Such a heartfelt journey of emotions and remembrance. God bless you. Congratulations on your win Charles :)

Sam Kauffman May 20, 2020 at 10:38 PM Charlie, this is heartbreaking as is the disease of dementia. To watch people we love slip away, helpless to do anything but comfort, is one the saddest experiences of life. Congratulations on your win. This truly is a winner. Blessings my friend.

Krish Radhakrishna May 20, 2020 at 4:53 PM Congrats Charles on your win! Dementia is devastating and this poem is so touching! Regards

John Hamilton May 20, 2020 at 4:23 PM Thanks Charles for your entry, and congrats for placing! Well done!

John Watt May 20, 2020 at 4:12 PM Congrats, my friend, on this poignant write regarding dementia. Praying it doesn't come to my wife or me. Which is worse, to have it or to be married to it...

M. L. Kiser May 17, 2020 at 1:39 PM It does, my late father was diagnosed with dementia but in the end he had Alzheimer's. Well penned piece.

Ralph Sergi May 15, 2020 at 3:35 PM Hi Charles: May I say that I envy you and this beautiful heartfelt poem. Bravo,paisano!

Beata Agustin May 15, 2020 at 6:01 AM Thanks for sharing your love-filled muse that is likewise full of wit. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest.

Curtis Johnson May 14, 2020 at 9:30 AM Good one, Charles. Soooo funny to me.

Jennifer Proxenos May 14, 2020 at 1:02 AM Some people including me have so much on their minds, they forget from one minute to the next what they had in mind to do, lets face it however, women can multi-function more than men! Sorry Gershon dont take this personally, you multi function with ease therefore you will never get Dementia! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf May 13, 2020 at 4:21 PM Let's see. Should we double up or double down on dementia? ~ Double MintW

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 13, 2020 at 3:43 PM I like that. Lovely done. My grandmother will be 100 this week. Still mostly there. Good luck in the contest! xomo