Trouble In Paradise

I once knew a man from the city
Whose girlfriends were all very pretty
He did live a charmed life
Till found out by his wife
Where she kicked him at was a pity!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 9, 2010 at 3:23 PM
Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today Deb. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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September 9, 2010 at 9:24 AM
Lol, ouch, well it was a pity but must have been a laugh for her, so much for his charm lol, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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September 9, 2010 at 8:17 AM
LOL I think he deserved this kick, Deb. Very funny limerick! Love, Carolyn
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September 9, 2010 at 8:11 AM
cute one, much enjoyed this morning
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