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Trouble In Paradise

their garden of dreams

     neglected and overgrown ~

          now teeming with weeds




Date written: 12/07/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Hello Edward, yes flowers do teem with weeds in the fall. enjoy your day my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 11:12 AM
Yes, Darlene. I'm already doing my Christmas shopping:-) Enjoy your day, my friend!
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 10:05 AM
Hello Edward, Hi! Are you getting ready for Christmas? Thenk you, enjoy your day my friend.
Ibeh Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 1:10 PM
Thanks for the lovely visit, Darlene:-) Enjoy you day as well...
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