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Trouble

He was sun-scorched, flame-torched stood tall, strong as a brick wall loose-hipped, well equipped in for the count, without a doubt expert tracked, surprise packed spurs jangled, wild mustang wrangled I should have, could have but I was lost, dust-bowl tossed; in Trouble! In a mess, I confess as he turned, my body burned fanned my face, acting chaste he was endearing, God-fearing a lop-sided smile, immaculate styled I could have run, fired my gun but I only choked, when he spoke, he was ice cool, me more the fool; he's Trouble! He tipped his hat, steel-grey eyes of a cat heavy lidded, my heart skidded, he said, 'Maam?', took my hand his cornfield hair, his unnerving stare I might have, right have high-tail, hit the trail the preacher grins, there's all my kin now side-by-side, my downhill slide; into Trouble! All curtailed, I in veil 'Do you take?, my mistake? white wedding gown, two hearts pound next the ring, my clammy skin my Pa's tears, must squelch my fears all too late, more my fate the thrown rice, last minute advice my Mama's bliss, that sweet kiss; of Trouble! Blushing bride, our buggy ride all alone, our log cabin home white picket fence, it all makes sense just me and you, the mountain's view angels singing up above, it must be love carried past the oven door, need I say more? a four-poster bed, enough said 'What a Man!', to our life plan; without Trouble! ©25/02/2012

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Date: 4/22/2012 7:56:00 AM
It is wise to stay away from trouble Jane. Well written. Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Jane Richer
Date: 4/22/2012 8:05:00 AM
Why Anne Lise, trouble is my middle name, ha ha. I am glad you like this poem. Have a great Sunday yourself sweetie!:D Love Jane
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Jane Richer
Date: 4/22/2012 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Susan, this is the second of three poems; which I call The Cabin! I also entered this poem in the Hero's competition here on PS. Cowboys and Homesteaders are Hero's to me! Love Jane
Date: 4/21/2012 8:14:00 AM
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Jane Richer
Date: 4/22/2012 8:02:00 AM
Hi Susan, Anne Lise commented just as I finished commenting to you, so look for your reply in her square. lol Love Jane
Date: 4/21/2012 5:07:00 AM
Like the rhyme and appreciate the effort that went into this creatively humorous write. Well done
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Jane Richer
Date: 4/22/2012 8:07:00 AM
Thank you Anthony, it was fun to write and I love to add humor in to spice up a poem. Love Jane
Date: 4/21/2012 4:48:00 AM
Nice .. like it a lot xx
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Jane Richer
Date: 4/22/2012 8:13:00 AM
Why Mandy, that appears to be a Cowboy hat upon your head, you must like Cowboys too! :D I am glad you like this poem, it was great fun to write. It is the second of three that deal with homesteaders and those that came from another country to start a new life. Love Jane

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