Trouble

He was sun-scorched, flame-torched
stood tall, strong as a brick wall
loose-hipped, well equipped
in for the count, without a doubt
expert tracked, surprise packed
spurs jangled, wild mustang wrangled
I should have, could have
but I was lost, dust-bowl tossed; in Trouble!
 
In a mess, I confess
as he turned, my body burned
fanned my face, acting chaste
he was endearing, God-fearing
a lop-sided smile, immaculate styled
I could have run, fired my gun
but I only choked, when he spoke,
he was ice cool, me more the fool; he's Trouble!
 
He tipped his hat, steel-grey eyes of a cat
heavy lidded, my heart skidded,
he said, 'Maam?', took my hand
his cornfield hair, his unnerving stare
I might have, right have
high-tail, hit the trail
the preacher grins, there's all my kin
now side-by-side, my downhill slide; into Trouble!
 
All curtailed, I in veil
'Do you take?, my mistake?
white wedding gown, two hearts pound
next the ring, my clammy skin
my Pa's tears, must squelch my fears
all too late, more my fate
the thrown rice, last minute advice
my Mama's bliss, that sweet kiss; of Trouble!
 
Blushing bride, our buggy ride
all alone, our log cabin home
white picket fence, it all makes sense
just me and you, the mountain's view
angels singing up above, it must be love
carried past the oven door, need I say more?
a four-poster bed, enough said
'What a Man!', to our life plan; without Trouble!
 
©25/02/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/22/2012 7:56:00 AM
It is wise to stay away from trouble Jane. Well written. Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Jane Richer
Date: 4/22/2012 8:05:00 AM
Why Anne Lise, trouble is my middle name, ha ha. I am glad you like this poem. Have a great Sunday yourself sweetie!:D Love Jane
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Jane Richer
Date: 4/22/2012 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Susan, this is the second of three poems; which I call The Cabin! I also entered this poem in the Hero's competition here on PS. Cowboys and Homesteaders are Hero's to me! Love Jane
Date: 4/21/2012 8:14:00 AM
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Jane Richer
Date: 4/22/2012 8:02:00 AM
Hi Susan, Anne Lise commented just as I finished commenting to you, so look for your reply in her square. lol Love Jane
Date: 4/21/2012 5:07:00 AM
Like the rhyme and appreciate the effort that went into this creatively humorous write. Well done
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Jane Richer
Date: 4/22/2012 8:07:00 AM
Thank you Anthony, it was fun to write and I love to add humor in to spice up a poem. Love Jane
Date: 4/21/2012 4:48:00 AM
Nice .. like it a lot xx
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Date: 4/22/2012 8:13:00 AM
Why Mandy, that appears to be a Cowboy hat upon your head, you must like Cowboys too! :D I am glad you like this poem, it was great fun to write. It is the second of three that deal with homesteaders and those that came from another country to start a new life. Love Jane
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