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Tropical Treasures Indeed

Sand stuck in my shorts
Mother-in-law is shark bait
Blue water now red

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Carol Sunshine Brown

July 12, 2010 at 11:17 AM

Congratulations Larry on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 11, 2010 at 9:15 PM

Congrats on the 10th place win, Larry

Joyce Johnson

July 11, 2010 at 2:10 PM

Well this is certainly different than the usual. Your poor long suffering mother-in-law must have a very great sense of humor. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

July 11, 2010 at 1:10 PM

LOL This is a hoot, Larry. Two wins in one day. Congratulations! Really loved your Smile Mona Smile, too.

July 11, 2010 at 10:43 AM

Nice use of alliteration. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Tropical Treasures contest. I wish you continued success. Keep on writing! Karen

John Freeman

July 11, 2010 at 10:17 AM

Congratulations Larry. This one is hilarous. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

July 11, 2010 at 10:07 AM

You and the mother in law. I would like to see you on Comic Central doing these, Larry. Would she be in the audience applauding? Haha. Congratuations! Luv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 11, 2010 at 9:22 AM

Congrats Larry on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this more than funny Haiku ..u always make me smile and thankxx for supporting my contests .. with luv..