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Tropical Treasures Indeed

Sand stuck in my shorts Mother-in-law is shark bait Blue water now red

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2010 11:17:00 AM

Congratulations Larry on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 9:15:00 PM

Congrats on the 10th place win, Larry

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/11/2010 2:10:00 PM

Well this is certainly different than the usual. Your poor long suffering mother-in-law must have a very great sense of humor. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/11/2010 1:10:00 PM

LOL This is a hoot, Larry. Two wins in one day. Congratulations! Really loved your Smile Mona Smile, too.

Date: 7/11/2010 10:43:00 AM

Nice use of alliteration. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Tropical Treasures contest. I wish you continued success. Keep on writing! Karen

John Freeman

Date: 7/11/2010 10:17:00 AM

Congratulations Larry. This one is hilarous. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2010 10:07:00 AM

You and the mother in law. I would like to see you on Comic Central doing these, Larry. Would she be in the audience applauding? Haha. Congratuations! Luv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2010 9:22:00 AM

Congrats Larry on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this more than funny Haiku ..u always make me smile and thankxx for supporting my contests .. with luv..