Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Tropical Paradise

Isolated island entices my senses
With fruits,flowers,and white sand
A beauty with no other pretenses
The offerings of this gorgeous hot land

Ocean of a clear turquoise green
Skinny dipping in the cool waterfalls 
Natures boutique is all that's seen
Free and sweeter without any walls

Night skies seen like no other before
Moon beams and stars shine brighter
Who could ever expect or want more
To gaze beauty as you hold me tighter 

Colors brighter then any I've known
Bright yellows reds, greens, and blues
More brilliant then I'd ever been shown
On this paradise with so many hues

1st place
Contest:100 words exactly
Sponsor:Caren Krutsinger
9/15/2019

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Constance La France September 26, 2019 at 4:29 PM Brenda congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem! Brenda Chiri September 26, 2019 at 10:04 PM Thank you so much my friend!;)

John Hamilton September 26, 2019 at 1:08 PM So nice Brenda, congrats on a shared first place win! Brenda Chiri September 26, 2019 at 1:48 PM Thank you John!;)

Janis Medders Tobechi September 26, 2019 at 11:35 AM A wonderful world. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved. Brenda Chiri September 26, 2019 at 1:48 PM Thank you Janis! So appreciated! ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 26, 2019 at 8:30 AM - A beautiful paradise, Brenda :) - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Brenda Chiri September 26, 2019 at 1:47 PM Yea I wish I could visit it for real!;) thank you Anne-Lise!;)

Regina Mcintosh September 26, 2019 at 6:11 AM Congratulations on your win:) Brenda Chiri September 26, 2019 at 1:47 PM Regina thanks so much!;)

John Gondolf September 26, 2019 at 6:09 AM Wow, Bren, this sounds like a place I want to see, congrats on your top win my friend. Hugs, John Brenda Chiri September 26, 2019 at 3:07 PM Thanks so much John!;)

Curtis Moorman September 19, 2019 at 3:55 PM Brenda, my Air Force career allowed me to spend 3 marvelous years in Hawaii. I saw all that you described, and more. Not a day passed when I didn't see a rainbow. Pictures in magazines can't compare to the reality. May I suggest a savings fund to make your dream come true. Brenda Chiri September 19, 2019 at 5:42 PM That would be nice but I doubt I ever get to see my paradise!;) thank you!;)

Constance La France September 17, 2019 at 7:54 PM Brenda, lovely, I want to go to your tropical paradise! Brenda Chiri September 18, 2019 at 8:07 AM I do too lol! One day I hope I can but until then I only see it trough pages in a magazine!;) thank you so much!;)

Regina Mcintosh September 17, 2019 at 10:54 AM Beautiful inspired words that created a joyful poem. God bless you and all my best for a win Brenda Chiri September 17, 2019 at 11:06 AM Thank you so much Regina!;)

Chris Green September 17, 2019 at 7:40 AM A beautiful poetic oasis flows from your talented pen my friend. A tropical paradise, like a dream it appears in your words. Best wishes in the contest Brenda Chiri September 17, 2019 at 9:52 AM Thank so much chris! Appreciate your warm comment;)

Winged Warrior September 17, 2019 at 7:33 AM A vivid interpretation sissy poo...I can just see you breathing your Dragon Fire)))))))))))))) there lol...a fav from bro bro...a very (((HOT))) place to be... very cool lol...:o) Brenda Chiri September 17, 2019 at 9:52 AM Ah bro bro!;) my silly brother I'm so glad you stopped by! My insanity needs yoursane comments at times! Lol! Thank WW!;)

Tom Cunningham September 16, 2019 at 12:35 PM A beautiful image in your verse Brenda, the white sand and palm trees, not forgetting cocktails on the beach watching the sun setting. Tom Brenda Chiri September 16, 2019 at 12:41 PM Lol I think that falls into the colors!;) thanks so much Tom!;)

Sandra Adams September 16, 2019 at 11:41 AM sigh, this sounds like the most beautiful paradise, thanks for allowing me to see it come to life through your words...excellent penning my friend :) hugs Brenda Chiri September 16, 2019 at 12:40 PM Thanks so much girl! I appreciate your kindness!;)

Gershon Wolf September 16, 2019 at 8:56 AM I, too, (like Victor below) can only imagine such a paradise. Nice entry for the 100 words contest, Brenda. Best wishes, Gershon Brenda Chiri September 16, 2019 at 9:35 AM Thank you Gershon!;)