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Tropical Paradise

Isolated island entices my senses With fruits,flowers,and white sand A beauty with no other pretenses The offerings of this gorgeous hot land Ocean of a clear turquoise green Skinny dipping in the cool waterfalls Natures boutique is all that's seen Free and sweeter without any walls Night skies seen like no other before Moon beams and stars shine brighter Who could ever expect or want more To gaze beauty as you hold me tighter Colors brighter then any I've known Bright yellows reds, greens, and blues More brilliant then I'd ever been shown On this paradise with so many hues 1st place Contest:100 words exactly Sponsor:Caren Krutsinger 9/15/2019

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Constance La France

Date: 9/26/2019 4:29:00 PM

Brenda congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/26/2019 10:04:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend!;)

John Hamilton

Date: 9/26/2019 1:08:00 PM

So nice Brenda, congrats on a shared first place win!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/26/2019 1:48:00 PM

Thank you John!;)

Janis Thompson

Date: 9/26/2019 11:35:00 AM

A wonderful world. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/26/2019 1:48:00 PM

Thank you Janis! So appreciated! ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/26/2019 8:30:00 AM

- A beautiful paradise, Brenda :) - Congratulations on your top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/26/2019 1:47:00 PM

Yea I wish I could visit it for real!;) thank you Anne-Lise!;)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/26/2019 6:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win:)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/26/2019 1:47:00 PM

Regina thanks so much!;)

John Gondolf

Date: 9/26/2019 6:09:00 AM

Wow, Bren, this sounds like a place I want to see, congrats on your top win my friend. Hugs, John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/26/2019 3:07:00 PM

Thanks so much John!;)

Curtis Moorman

Date: 9/19/2019 3:55:00 PM

Brenda, my Air Force career allowed me to spend 3 marvelous years in Hawaii. I saw all that you described, and more. Not a day passed when I didn't see a rainbow. Pictures in magazines can't compare to the reality. May I suggest a savings fund to make your dream come true.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/19/2019 5:42:00 PM

That would be nice but I doubt I ever get to see my paradise!;) thank you!;)

Constance La France

Date: 9/17/2019 7:54:00 PM

Brenda, lovely, I want to go to your tropical paradise!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/18/2019 8:07:00 AM

I do too lol! One day I hope I can but until then I only see it trough pages in a magazine!;) thank you so much!;)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/17/2019 10:54:00 AM

Beautiful inspired words that created a joyful poem. God bless you and all my best for a win

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/17/2019 11:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Regina!;)

Chris Green

Date: 9/17/2019 7:40:00 AM

A beautiful poetic oasis flows from your talented pen my friend. A tropical paradise, like a dream it appears in your words. Best wishes in the contest

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/17/2019 9:52:00 AM

Thank so much chris! Appreciate your warm comment;)

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/17/2019 7:33:00 AM

A vivid interpretation sissy poo...I can just see you breathing your Dragon Fire)))))))))))))) there lol...a fav from bro bro...a very (((HOT))) place to be... very cool lol...:o)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/17/2019 9:52:00 AM

Ah bro bro!;) my silly brother I'm so glad you stopped by! My insanity needs yoursane comments at times! Lol! Thank WW!;)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/16/2019 12:35:00 PM

A beautiful image in your verse Brenda, the white sand and palm trees, not forgetting cocktails on the beach watching the sun setting. Tom

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/16/2019 12:41:00 PM

Lol I think that falls into the colors!;) thanks so much Tom!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/16/2019 11:41:00 AM

sigh, this sounds like the most beautiful paradise, thanks for allowing me to see it come to life through your words...excellent penning my friend :) hugs

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/16/2019 12:40:00 PM

Thanks so much girl! I appreciate your kindness!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/16/2019 8:56:00 AM

I, too, (like Victor below) can only imagine such a paradise. Nice entry for the 100 words contest, Brenda. Best wishes, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/16/2019 9:35:00 AM

Thank you Gershon!;)